Wailing Willow

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Willow wail
Through spoil storms
Trend is harsh.
Strength is right.
Glory grace conceals life's grief.
Our souls yearn for home.


Written: January 09, 2022

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Valsa George

Date: 1/9/2022 7:40:00 PM

Indeed it is a weeping willow with its branches drooping down. Storms must have twisted its branches as our life too gets twisted sometimes by the storms of life. It is the thought of the glory awaiting us, that gives comfort to our lives . So much meaning you have hidden in your simple lines.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/9/2022 2:07:00 PM

Your photo reflects in your words, Lassad. Great imagery.