Meenakshi Raina Poet Alliteration

Wailing

no one knows nothing
when wrapped with
smooth silver silence 
some secrets sleep.

helpless heart hopes
love lives long 
but beneath betrayal
deep desires die.

time twists tides
some sail safe
some seize sand
while wailing waiting.



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May 9, 2016

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George D. Miller February 1, 2021 at 7:47 PM I have not tried to write poetry as you do. I thought your pattern was wonderful. George.

Jennifer Fenn January 25, 2021 at 10:55 PM I like this pattern -I’ll have to try alliteration sometime.

Milton Robertson January 25, 2021 at 5:38 PM Wise work. Very well put together. Beautiful.

Unknown Person June 14, 2016 at 2:11 AM AWESOME PIECE....THIS IS WHAT WE CALL AMAZING

Skat A May 13, 2016 at 1:24 PM Meenakshi Raina, Congratulations on the win. Stop and enjoy my blog "Peace is a Fugitive." SKAT LOVE

Weeping Willow May 6, 2016 at 3:11 PM I do know not what exactly should I write. This is just full 7, thank you. WW Meenakshi Raina May 9, 2016 at 1:13 PM Thank you...

Jim Tidd March 3, 2016 at 7:52 AM perfectly pretty poetry Meenakshi Raina March 3, 2016 at 10:32 AM Thank you...