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We giggled on Sue's wedding day She walked with her dog down the aisle! Fresh flower bouquet's - so passé We giggled on Sues's wedding day Sue held a quirky food bouquet! Her canine bridesmaid made us smile We giggled on Sue's wedding day she walked with her dog down the aisle! Try a Triolet Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman checked with rhymezone each line 8 syllables as per HMS Inspired after seeing a picture of a bridal bouquet made of bacon roses! 05/22/21

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Terry Flood

Date: 5/27/2021 3:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan. I doubt I’d marry someone for bacon... I’d probably wag my tail though... I love bacon! Well done. Terry

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/25/2021 8:24:00 PM

This was cute, Jan. My dad had a dog that he took with him everywhere. He even brought him with him on my wedding day! Fortunately he didn't bring him into the chapel. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Judy Ball

Date: 5/25/2021 6:26:00 PM

Really cute Jan. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2021 12:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your podium win with this delightful poem Jan. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/25/2021 11:18:00 AM

Very quirky and so much fun, Jan! Congrats and high paw fives!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/24/2021 10:42:00 PM

Really interesting. Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/24/2021 9:51:00 PM

A fun poem, Jan, well done, congratulations:)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/24/2021 4:15:00 PM

My husband's cousin carried her small dog down the aisle on her wedding day, like a bouquet. No problems, no mishaps, it meant a lot to here and that's what counts. Congratulations on a unique triolet

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/23/2021 9:30:00 AM

What a lovely bridesmaid Sue had on her wedding day, her faithful friend, though some would say she was barking mad. A superb Triolet for the contest… Belle :-) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2021 11:52:00 AM

ha ha ha I am not a fan of the triolet form in fact i did a poem called tedious triolet lol but i thought I would give this contest a go:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/23/2021 6:32:00 AM

Creative one. I bet that was an interesting wedding. That bouquet was a banquet for the animals. Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2021 11:51:00 AM

Its so funny Sara the original draft was about a white wedding but I wanted to make it a little quirky and found out about bacon bouquets and the poem totally changed and i liked the idea of the dog lol:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2021 4:13:00 AM

This is adorable Jan, especially when you think of how many love their animals more than people. This poem should do well in the contest. I hope you and your husband are doing well? Blessings, Connie

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2021 11:50:00 AM

Thanks Connie we are doing pretty well, love to you and the family:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/22/2021 10:54:00 PM

Hope she didnt yap yap yap through the service Lol. Good luck Jan Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2021 11:49:00 AM

last year we went to a funeral and the dog was there and howled throughout the service it was so distressing:-( hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2021 9:30:00 PM

You read the most interesting things in your newspaper. The idea of taking a dog to marriage is funny. Great write.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2021 11:49:00 AM

lol Victor i dont get a newspaper just see funny stories on the web, another wedding poem from a news story was called 'let's raise a toaster to the bride and groom' :-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/22/2021 8:22:00 PM

Gee, and I was hoping it was an interspecies marriage there for a second. Cute write, Jan. ~ gw

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2021 11:47:00 AM

lol thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/22/2021 7:46:00 PM

Delightful, delightful!!!! I loved your poem, and I could just see the audience's reaction at this wedding. Nice job, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2021 11:47:00 AM

Thanks Milton it is nothing like my original draft lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/22/2021 6:47:00 PM

Hello Jan ... it is a little different to a traditional wedding but one that won't be forgotten by the guests - enjoyed this with a smile Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2021 11:47:00 AM

The original poem was about a traditional white wedding but it got edited and edited and looks nothing like my first thoughts lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/22/2021 6:05:00 PM

WoW! Jan, What a fun and creative write. I'm with Heidi reading this put a smile on my face. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your weekend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2021 11:46:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/22/2021 5:39:00 PM

Very creative Jan. This brought a smile. I hope you have a nice weekend :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2021 6:00:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, my friend's daughter got married yesterday (saturday) perhaps that is what inspired me to go down the wedding theme for the contest lol:-) hugs jan xx