Jan Allison Poet Triolet

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Wacky Wedding

We giggled on Sue's wedding day
She walked with her dog down the aisle!
Fresh flower bouquet's  - so passé 
We giggled on Sues's wedding day
Sue held a quirky food bouquet!
Her canine bridesmaid made us smile
We giggled on Sue's wedding day
she walked with her dog down the aisle!


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each line 8 syllables as per HMS

Inspired after seeing a picture of a bridal  bouquet made of bacon roses!

05/22/21

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Terry Flood May 27, 2021 at 3:09 PM Congrats on your win, Jan. I doubt I’d marry someone for bacon... I’d probably wag my tail though... I love bacon! Well done. Terry

Kim Merryman May 25, 2021 at 8:24 PM This was cute, Jan. My dad had a dog that he took with him everywhere. He even brought him with him on my wedding day! Fortunately he didn't bring him into the chapel. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Judy Ball May 25, 2021 at 6:26 PM Really cute Jan. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2021 at 12:32 PM Congratulations on your podium win with this delightful poem Jan. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman May 25, 2021 at 11:18 AM Very quirky and so much fun, Jan! Congrats and high paw fives!

Christuraj Alex May 24, 2021 at 10:42 PM Really interesting. Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel May 24, 2021 at 9:51 PM A fun poem, Jan, well done, congratulations:)

Reason A. Poteet May 24, 2021 at 4:15 PM My husband's cousin carried her small dog down the aisle on her wedding day, like a bouquet. No problems, no mishaps, it meant a lot to here and that's what counts. Congratulations on a unique triolet

Beryl Edmonds May 23, 2021 at 9:30 AM What a lovely bridesmaid Sue had on her wedding day, her faithful friend, though some would say she was barking mad. A superb Triolet for the contest… Belle :-) xx Jan Allison May 24, 2021 at 11:52 AM ha ha ha I am not a fan of the triolet form in fact i did a poem called tedious triolet lol but i thought I would give this contest a go:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick May 23, 2021 at 6:32 AM Creative one. I bet that was an interesting wedding. That bouquet was a banquet for the animals. Sara Jan Allison May 24, 2021 at 11:51 AM Its so funny Sara the original draft was about a white wedding but I wanted to make it a little quirky and found out about bacon bouquets and the poem totally changed and i liked the idea of the dog lol:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong May 23, 2021 at 4:13 AM This is adorable Jan, especially when you think of how many love their animals more than people. This poem should do well in the contest. I hope you and your husband are doing well? Blessings, Connie Jan Allison May 24, 2021 at 11:50 AM Thanks Connie we are doing pretty well, love to you and the family:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham May 22, 2021 at 10:54 PM Hope she didnt yap yap yap through the service Lol. Good luck Jan Tom Jan Allison May 24, 2021 at 11:49 AM last year we went to a funeral and the dog was there and howled throughout the service it was so distressing:-( hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar May 22, 2021 at 9:30 PM You read the most interesting things in your newspaper. The idea of taking a dog to marriage is funny. Great write. Jan Allison May 24, 2021 at 11:49 AM lol Victor i dont get a newspaper just see funny stories on the web, another wedding poem from a news story was called 'let's raise a toaster to the bride and groom' :-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf May 22, 2021 at 8:22 PM Gee, and I was hoping it was an interspecies marriage there for a second. Cute write, Jan. ~ gw Jan Allison May 24, 2021 at 11:47 AM lol thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins May 22, 2021 at 7:46 PM Delightful, delightful!!!! I loved your poem, and I could just see the audience's reaction at this wedding. Nice job, Jan! Jan Allison May 24, 2021 at 11:47 AM Thanks Milton it is nothing like my original draft lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie May 22, 2021 at 6:47 PM Hello Jan ... it is a little different to a traditional wedding but one that won't be forgotten by the guests - enjoyed this with a smile Jan - Lindsay Jan Allison May 24, 2021 at 11:47 AM The original poem was about a traditional white wedding but it got edited and edited and looks nothing like my first thoughts lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. May 22, 2021 at 6:05 PM WoW! Jan, What a fun and creative write. I'm with Heidi reading this put a smile on my face. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your weekend:-) Alexis Jan Allison May 24, 2021 at 11:46 AM Thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands May 22, 2021 at 5:39 PM Very creative Jan. This brought a smile. I hope you have a nice weekend :) Jan Allison May 22, 2021 at 6:00 PM Thanks Heidi, my friend's daughter got married yesterday (saturday) perhaps that is what inspired me to go down the wedding theme for the contest lol:-) hugs jan xx