Vulnerable


It has happened again,
your true feelings are once more exposed
Vulnerable
Out in the open,
where your heart can be attacked
Anxiety ridden,
palpitations increase
Got an overwhelming urge to flee,
and go hide
Hide your vulnerable heart
Put it safely under lock and key
Blow after blow,
hurt after hurt,
has made you wary of anyone having true 
interest in you
Particularly that of a romantic nature
Do they just want to be friends,
keep it purely platonic?
Or do they want to rush on in
Bombard you with flowers and phone calls,
remember every personal detail, no matter how small
Are they for real,
are they on the up and up?
Are they being sincere,
do they truly care?
Or is this just another self-amused bluff
Someone trying to see if they can get you to open up
Get your heart exposed to the cold,
then numb the pain with a shot of sexual novocaine
Get you laughing, set your mind at ease
Make you drop your guard, so they can do as they please
No, stop the doubting,
you're a better judge of people now then you were back then
If your heart must be made vulnerable again,
you will always be free to choose
whether to open the door and let the prospect of love come in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/23/2016 8:54:00 AM
"Sexual Novocaine" What a great line. Yes we must protect our heart but still be willing to open our hearts to the right person. Well expressed Freddie. Merry Christmas my friend.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/23/2016 1:01:00 PM
Ty, Richard. Appreciate the glowing comments. Have a Merry Christmas. Love and peace.
Date: 12/23/2016 8:39:00 AM
Hi Freddie, I agree with the others below. You are a gifted writer indeed. Many well be able to connect and relate to this piece. You write about real issues, and that's why the reader is drawn to your amazing pen. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/23/2016 12:58:00 PM
Ty, Alexis. I try to connect w/the reader on real issues that affect our lives. Share each other's joy, share each other's pain. Love your perceptive comments, they help sharpen my pen. Have a blessed holiday. Love and joy toy you.
Date: 12/22/2016 10:28:00 AM
This is excellent Freddie. I believe many people can relate to this! Great ending too! :) God Bless
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/22/2016 10:26:00 PM
Ty, Heidi. I am just a humble poet messenger. Giving hope to people is a duty I do not take lightly. Ty for the kind words. Much love to you.
Date: 12/22/2016 8:58:00 AM
This is another masterclass by my friend, a great poet indeed! I adore your creativity, Freddie.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/22/2016 9:10:00 AM
Ty, Adeniji. Your gracious comments really do inspire me to write better. You and the other poets/poetesses are my muse. Stay blessed, less stressed. Love and blessings to you.
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