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Vroum Vroum

Looking for a car, fair to presume Brownie points for value I assume I've got the ideal car for whom Promises never a day of gloom Perfectly loaded for bride and groom From the mirror dangles a heirloom Plenty room in case of baby boom Gargantuan trunk can store a broom With your supply of Fruit of the Loom Itty bitty gas it does consume You'll never notice a single fume Comes with that built-in new car perfume Ever so convenient in our combe Parks itself into your livingroom So come to my office to resume I'll gladly make you some elbowroom Let me clear off the desk move the bloom So away you can sign with my plume Submitted on February 12, 2018 for contest POETRY IN MOTION sponsored by KIM RODRIGUES - RANKED 2ND

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Charlie Smith

Date: 3/8/2018 3:17:00 PM

Wow! Well done Line, congratulations...

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2018 5:39:00 PM

Taking orders now for this little beauty, Charlie. Red or blue?

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/7/2018 1:17:00 PM

A very cute poem with great Monorhyme, Line. Congrats on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2018 1:30:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2018 11:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2018 1:31:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2018 4:04:00 PM

Such fabulous rhyme line, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 5:46:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/6/2018 3:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 5:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tom. Much appreciated.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/6/2018 3:30:00 PM

Fun poem! Congratulations on your win! xomo :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 5:48:00 PM

Thanks, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Roy Pett

Date: 3/6/2018 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Line, really enjoyed reading your well written poem. :))

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 5:48:00 PM

Thanks, Roy. Most appreciated visit and message.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/6/2018 12:27:00 PM

Line, those rhymes are precious: New car perfume...sign with my plume. Just love 'em! Well-earned winner! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 1:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/6/2018 9:42:00 AM

An original ride for sure, Line! Love that it parks itself right in the living room. Fun title too! Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2018 1:44:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. I'll have one shipped directly to your mailbox. LOL Line xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/13/2018 7:24:00 PM

That's a fun poem - love the creative monorhymes! Good luck in te contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/13/2018 9:23:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Carole Duet

Date: 2/12/2018 11:17:00 PM

This is ever so clever. I never thought I would ever...learn a word like "combe"! lol GL in the contest, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2018 11:34:00 PM

Yes, it was meant as an educational poem. LOL. Thanks for your visit and cute comment, Carole.

Silent One

Date: 2/12/2018 5:41:00 PM

Nice poem Line..

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2018 11:35:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, SO.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/12/2018 5:06:00 PM

Are you a car salesman?! You could be. Seriously, this is very GOOD! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2018 5:27:00 PM

Thank you, Janice. Actually, I don't even drive so it took me a while to feel inspired for this contest. LOL