Line Gauthier Poet Monorhyme

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Vroum Vroum

Looking for a car, fair to presume
Brownie points for value I assume
I've got the ideal car for whom
Promises never a day of gloom
Perfectly loaded for bride and groom
From the mirror dangles a heirloom
Plenty room in case of baby boom
Gargantuan trunk can store a broom
With your supply of Fruit of the Loom
Itty bitty gas it does consume
You'll never notice a single fume
Comes with that built-in new car perfume
Ever so convenient in our combe
Parks itself into your livingroom

So come to my office to resume
I'll gladly make you some elbowroom
Let me clear off the desk move the bloom
So away you can sign with my plume



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on February 12, 2018 for contest POETRY IN MOTION sponsored by KIM RODRIGUES  -  RANKED 2ND

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Charlie Smith March 8, 2018 at 3:17 PM Wow! Well done Line, congratulations... Line Gauthier March 8, 2018 at 5:39 PM Taking orders now for this little beauty, Charlie. Red or blue?

Sandra Haight March 7, 2018 at 1:17 PM A very cute poem with great Monorhyme, Line. Congrats on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra Line Gauthier March 7, 2018 at 1:30 PM Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.

Eve Roper March 6, 2018 at 11:41 PM Congratulations on your win hugs Eve Line Gauthier March 7, 2018 at 1:31 PM Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Jan Allison March 6, 2018 at 4:04 PM Such fabulous rhyme line, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 5:46 PM Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham March 6, 2018 at 3:54 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Line. Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 5:48 PM Thank you so much, Tom. Much appreciated.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 6, 2018 at 3:30 PM Fun poem! Congratulations on your win! xomo :) Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 5:48 PM Thanks, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Roy Pett March 6, 2018 at 3:05 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Line, really enjoyed reading your well written poem. :)) Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 5:48 PM Thanks, Roy. Most appreciated visit and message.

Gershon Wolf March 6, 2018 at 12:27 PM Line, those rhymes are precious: New car perfume...sign with my plume. Just love 'em! Well-earned winner! :) Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 1:45 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2018 at 9:42 AM An original ride for sure, Line! Love that it parks itself right in the living room. Fun title too! Congratulations! Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 1:44 PM Thanks, Kim. I'll have one shipped directly to your mailbox. LOL Line xx

Agnes Krampe February 13, 2018 at 7:24 PM That's a fun poem - love the creative monorhymes! Good luck in te contest. Line Gauthier February 13, 2018 at 9:23 PM Thank you, Agnes. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Carole Duet February 12, 2018 at 11:17 PM This is ever so clever. I never thought I would ever...learn a word like "combe"! lol GL in the contest, Line. Line Gauthier February 12, 2018 at 11:34 PM Yes, it was meant as an educational poem. LOL. Thanks for your visit and cute comment, Carole.

Silent One February 12, 2018 at 5:41 PM Nice poem Line.. Line Gauthier February 12, 2018 at 11:35 PM Thanks for your visit, SO.

Janice Canerdy February 12, 2018 at 5:06 PM Are you a car salesman?! You could be. Seriously, this is very GOOD! Janice Line Gauthier February 12, 2018 at 5:27 PM Thank you, Janice. Actually, I don't even drive so it took me a while to feel inspired for this contest. LOL