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Vroum Vroum

Looking for a car, fair to presume
Brownie points for value I assume
I've got the ideal car for whom
Promises never a day of gloom
Perfectly loaded for bride and groom
From the mirror dangles a heirloom
Plenty room in case of baby boom
Gargantuan trunk can store a broom
With your supply of Fruit of the Loom
Itty bitty gas it does consume
You'll never notice a single fume
Comes with that built-in new car perfume
Ever so convenient in our combe
Parks itself into your livingroom

So come to my office to resume
I'll gladly make you some elbowroom
Let me clear off the desk move the bloom
So away you can sign with my plume



Submitted on February 12, 2018 for contest POETRY IN MOTION sponsored by KIM RODRIGUES  -  RANKED 2ND

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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Charlie Smith Date: 3/8/2018 3:17:00 PM Wow! Well done Line, congratulations... Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/8/2018 5:39:00 PM Taking orders now for this little beauty, Charlie. Red or blue?

Sandra Haight Date: 3/7/2018 1:17:00 PM A very cute poem with great Monorhyme, Line. Congrats on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/7/2018 1:30:00 PM Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.

Eve Roper Date: 3/6/2018 11:41:00 PM Congratulations on your win hugs Eve Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/7/2018 1:31:00 PM Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Jan Allison Date: 3/6/2018 4:04:00 PM Such fabulous rhyme line, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/6/2018 5:46:00 PM Thanks, Jan. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/6/2018 3:54:00 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/6/2018 5:48:00 PM Thank you so much, Tom. Much appreciated.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 3/6/2018 3:30:00 PM Fun poem! Congratulations on your win! xomo :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/6/2018 5:48:00 PM Thanks, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Roy Pett Date: 3/6/2018 3:05:00 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Line, really enjoyed reading your well written poem. :)) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/6/2018 5:48:00 PM Thanks, Roy. Most appreciated visit and message.

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/6/2018 12:27:00 PM Line, those rhymes are precious: New car perfume...sign with my plume. Just love 'em! Well-earned winner! :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/6/2018 1:45:00 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/6/2018 9:42:00 AM An original ride for sure, Line! Love that it parks itself right in the living room. Fun title too! Congratulations! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/6/2018 1:44:00 PM Thanks, Kim. I'll have one shipped directly to your mailbox. LOL Line xx

Agnes Krampe Date: 2/13/2018 7:24:00 PM That's a fun poem - love the creative monorhymes! Good luck in te contest. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/13/2018 9:23:00 PM Thank you, Agnes. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Carole Duet Date: 2/12/2018 11:17:00 PM This is ever so clever. I never thought I would ever...learn a word like "combe"! lol GL in the contest, Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/12/2018 11:34:00 PM Yes, it was meant as an educational poem. LOL. Thanks for your visit and cute comment, Carole.

Silent One Date: 2/12/2018 5:41:00 PM Nice poem Line.. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/12/2018 11:35:00 PM Thanks for your visit, SO.

Janice Canerdy Date: 2/12/2018 5:06:00 PM Are you a car salesman?! You could be. Seriously, this is very GOOD! Janice Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/12/2018 5:27:00 PM Thank you, Janice. Actually, I don't even drive so it took me a while to feel inspired for this contest. LOL