David Kavanagh Poet Tanka

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Voyage of Dismay

voyage of dismay 


            slow boat drift away 
        fluidic ink bring what may
       godspeed through the grey
         final words i pen not say
        in love letter on mainstay



THE LAST LOVE LETTER
By David Kavanagh

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Caren Krutsinger January 20, 2021 at 5:17 AM Beautiful rhythm to this tanka David. David Kavanagh January 20, 2021 at 6:03 AM Thanks Caren, got an N/A in the contest, but the standard was pretty high, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty January 8, 2021 at 6:08 PM Message in a bottle David Kavanagh January 9, 2021 at 2:55 AM Its a strange thought provoking contest, this was my take on the picture above, cheers David Christopher Flaherty January 8, 2021 at 6:09 PM Meant also to say David On reflection taking a second read on board may i say how much i like this a lot