Voyage of Dismay

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voyage of dismay slow boat drift away fluidic ink bring what may godspeed through the grey final words i pen not say in love letter on mainstay THE LAST LOVE LETTER By David Kavanagh

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/20/2021 5:17:00 AM

Beautiful rhythm to this tanka David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2021 6:03:00 AM

Thanks Caren, got an N/A in the contest, but the standard was pretty high, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 1/8/2021 6:08:00 PM

Message in a bottle

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2021 2:55:00 AM

Its a strange thought provoking contest, this was my take on the picture above, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 1/8/2021 6:09:00 PM

Meant also to say David On reflection taking a second read on board may i say how much i like this a lot