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Voyage of Dismay

voyage of dismay 


            slow boat drift away 
        fluidic ink bring what may
       godspeed through the grey
         final words i pen not say
        in love letter on mainstay



THE LAST LOVE LETTER
By David Kavanagh

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/20/2021 5:17:00 AM Beautiful rhythm to this tanka David. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 1/20/2021 6:03:00 AM Thanks Caren, got an N/A in the contest, but the standard was pretty high, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty Date: 1/8/2021 6:08:00 PM Message in a bottle Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 1/9/2021 2:55:00 AM Its a strange thought provoking contest, this was my take on the picture above, cheers David Christopher Flaherty Date: 1/8/2021 6:09:00 PM Meant also to say David On reflection taking a second read on board may i say how much i like this a lot