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Vows of Love That Time and Distance Can Not Deny

Vows Of Love That Time And Distance Can Not Deny Beyond the ocean and high clifftop ledge Across great expanse of water and skies Two lovers far apart gave loving pledge vowing truest of loving never dies. Each longing for fever of midnight dreams welcoming beats of tender, aching cries Whilst wading through youthful life as a team insuring their foresworn oath never dies. In the distance, bright pharos blinking glow As if in time with lovers longing hearts Each in night's waning hours wanting to know Again that sweet each loving kiss imparts. Deep rising crescendo of true love's ache With romantic, sensual - hot delights Rhythm of loving taste as tide's splashing breaks As two hearts gasps beauty of tender nights. Waking to vernal freshness of dawn's rays Giving thanks for bounty of love's blessings As each, across the ocean bows to pray Love's eternity - both are confessing. R.J. Lindley, original May 2nd 1980 Romanticism, ( The beautiful hope of life, youth and love ) Edit, 9-27- 2006, 6-3-2021, 6-26-2021 Note: (1.) *pharos= (lowercase) any lighthouse or beacon to direct sailors. (2.)*vernal= ver·nal /'v?rnl/ , adjective of, in, or appropriate to spring. Note two- Excuse the many edits but fate, time, future insights demanded a few changes from the original as was first composed by a very none world hardened poet of a mere youthfully blind 26 years old, in the year of 1980. Removed were several dark verses warning of the many pitfalls of love and life that I, as have so very many other young lads- found to be a quite sad part of love when it fails. This new and heavily edited version represents the beauty and blessing of love when it triumphs and gifts its dearest, greatest sweet treasures….

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Date: 8/7/2021 10:46:00 AM
Such a wonderfulment...Beauty beyond words praises... Write on! A delightful verse..
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/13/2021 5:37:00 AM
Thank you my friend. God bless, always...
Date: 6/27/2021 6:32:00 PM
This is so beautiful and such a blessing. You've written in such a wonderful pen from your heart. Love it so. God bless you with many many more. love, Gina
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/29/2021 3:24:00 PM
Thank you my friend! So very kind of you to say so. And so truly a wonderful gift for me to find this day! That one of my very early poems from 41 years ago had such a positive and inspiring effect. God bless you....
Date: 6/27/2021 10:32:00 AM
Funny how as we get older our views change on lots of things as we see them in a different light, love included, quite a romantic verse Robert. Tom
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/27/2021 11:33:00 AM
Thank you my friend. As knowledge is gained, attitude and discernment change usually for the better, especially so in personal affairs if one has the character and internal fortitude to start to see how emotion tends to run high in youth and thus greatly cloud the issues. When looking back decades it is far easier to see through the muck, the emotion, personal bias and cloud of lies that are usually present. As the old timers used to say-- we get- "older and wiser"... IFFIN WE SURVIVE TO ARRIVE AT THAT DESTINATION. God bless..
Date: 6/27/2021 9:01:00 AM
I am so glad you edited the original, a sensual romantic piece indeed Robert:-) hugs Jan xx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/27/2021 9:36:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Truth is the original was a bit dark and somber. Of course it was composed by a young lad that was in that state when first writing it. Sometimes reality bites a bit too hard. This became better when I concentrated more on the glowing, inspirational, positive, beautiful and blessed treasures of love! One can always learn- in life, in love - in poetry too.. God bless...

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