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July 28, 2023

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Volleyball In the Rafters

Above the public pool a volleyball so cool stuck for years in the rafters Someone’s breath of life trapped in it’s bladder Evidence of their lingering presence, me wondering if they ever pondered the relevance of the essence they left behind? Singsong thoughts turn inward … What about me? In all the places I’ve been, pieces of me, residual traces of myself left behind, cast away! Small links, unforgotten, faithfully preserved by old friends— threads of connection reinforced by timeless bonds— who keep my words, moves (dancing!), and shared memories as precious cargo, cherished keepsakes, A clear reminder that I exist! I matter! I’m something much more than simply air I breathe on an unremembered day … Like that beautiful volleyball in the rafters W I L S O N ! ! !

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Date: 7/28/2023 6:50:00 PM
Love this and “Wilson!!!” which must relate to the movie “Cast Away.” I just found out my mother in law cried that she wasn’t at our wedding. She’s been gone for awhile. I had no idea. My husband told his adopted mom and stepdad after we were married. So many years ago…leaving dust prints…
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Date: 7/28/2023 9:55:00 PM
Hi, Kim. I appreciate the encouragement and am pleased you recognized the “Cast Away” reference. We’ve been married 50 years this month and we too are learning things about deceased family members that we wish we would have known while they were still alive. As you indicated, “So many years ago…leaving dust prints…”. ~Kind regards.

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