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Volcano

charcoal skies recoil demon pyramid, spews hell ~ earth weeps magma tears
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Sambourne Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 7:23 PM
The earth (here) in a fiendish turmoil. With war in Europe certainly a relevant write. The earth does indeed weep. An exceptional posting. Best wishes, Brian
Chamberlain Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 12:51 AM
Thank you. I couldn't agree more. Earth is grieving.
Radice Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 2:19 AM
There's so much more to this haiku below the surface. Great write Joanna. Cheers - Gary
Chamberlain Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 5:59 AM
Thank you. :-)
Cunningham Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 12:01 AM
You've discribed it well Joanna, love the earth weeps magma tears. Tom
Chamberlain Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 1:25 AM
Thank you.
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