Volcano

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charcoal skies recoil demon pyramid, spews hell ~ earth weeps magma tears

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/20/2023 7:23:00 PM

The earth (here) in a fiendish turmoil. With war in Europe certainly a relevant write. The earth does indeed weep. An exceptional posting. Best wishes, Brian

Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/21/2023 12:51:00 AM

Thank you. I couldn't agree more. Earth is grieving.

Gary Radice

Date: 7/22/2022 2:19:00 AM

There's so much more to this haiku below the surface. Great write Joanna. Cheers - Gary

Joanna Feltham
Date: 7/22/2022 5:59:00 AM

Thank you. :-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/22/2022 12:01:00 AM

You've discribed it well Joanna, love the earth weeps magma tears. Tom

Joanna Feltham
Date: 7/22/2022 1:25:00 AM

Thank you.