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Volcanic Eruption

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There's whispers deep in my soul Secrets guide me through the darkest night A hidden poetic gem shines whole This gem calms my inner fright There is a light dancing from my dreams Leaving stars twinkling in my eyes A sweet spirit within my soul beams As the crack of dawn begins to rise Within a poem begins to form As hot lava bubbling I need a chance to pen my storm All those confused thoughts troubling If only my whispers wouldn't leave That molten lava in my dreams Maybe a volcanic work I'd weave I must write or molten lava streams It will explode shooting into the air Ash, steam, sulfuric acid pours From horrible words, you I'll spare If only I didn't have so many chores

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Valsa George

Date: 7/19/2025 10:01:00 PM

The birth of a poem is like a volcanic eruption. Thoughts will be steaming inside. Without anticipation, sometimes eruption takes place and as hot lava streams down, words will flow down. Beautiful analogy and a sweet poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2025 3:55:00 AM

Valsa, I used to wake up at night with thoughts troubling and I would need to write, but not as much anymore. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 7/16/2025 3:54:00 AM

yes, writing is so cathartic - had to smile at the last line

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2025 3:54:00 AM

Yes, sometimes men have too many chores as well. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/15/2025 7:32:00 AM

Enchanting poem with great rhyming Sara. Writing is an excellent form of release. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2025 3:53:00 AM

I totally agree, Linda. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/3/2025 10:20:00 PM

So nicely composed. I’m charmed. Have Good Days

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/4/2025 4:42:00 AM

Why, thank you, Anisha. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

James Peranteau

Date: 7/2/2025 5:19:00 PM

suhhhmbody is unleashing a storm in sheep's underwear...i were fall'n in love and then, az vesuvius whaap! I mean...(((kaboom)))...there'z artist all up in this write...Thanx...much love

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/2/2025 5:24:00 PM

Why, thank you, James. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/2/2025 2:18:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Volcanic Eruption" write. Great last line. Yes, chores go far away so we can write more. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/2/2025 4:11:00 PM

Why, thank you, Paula. The chores overtake us don't they. Sara K

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/1/2025 11:40:00 PM

Beautiful way to express these emotions! Loved this.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/2/2025 2:40:00 AM

Arthur, I am glad that you understand. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/1/2025 5:06:00 PM

Vividly descriptive and emotional piece, Sara, one that I'm sure resonates with other poets.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/2/2025 2:38:00 AM

Thank you, Janice. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. I hope that others can see how writing helps relieve the pressure within through this work. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 6/30/2025 4:06:00 PM

A volcanic eruption from within producing poetry. Unique take on the theme Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/1/2025 5:56:00 AM

Tom, sometimes I feel that I could explode and if I can sit for a while and write it helps relieve the tension building within. Thanks for the visit. Sara K