Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Volcanic Eruption

There's whispers deep in my soul
Secrets guide me through the darkest night
A hidden poetic gem shines whole
This gem calms my inner fright

There is a light dancing from my dreams
Leaving stars twinkling in my eyes
A sweet spirit within my soul beams
As the crack of dawn begins to rise

Within a poem begins to form
As hot lava bubbling
I need a chance to pen my storm
All those confused thoughts troubling

If only my whispers wouldn't leave
That molten lava in my dreams
Maybe a volcanic work I'd weave
I must write or molten lava streams

It will explode shooting into the air
Ash, steam, sulfuric acid pours  
From horrible words, you I'll spare
If only I didn't have so many chores   

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Valsa George July 19, 2025 at 10:01 PM The birth of a poem is like a volcanic eruption. Thoughts will be steaming inside. Without anticipation, sometimes eruption takes place and as hot lava streams down, words will flow down. Beautiful analogy and a sweet poem. Sara Kendrick July 20, 2025 at 3:55 AM Valsa, I used to wake up at night with thoughts troubling and I would need to write, but not as much anymore. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Jack Horne July 16, 2025 at 3:54 AM yes, writing is so cathartic - had to smile at the last line Sara Kendrick July 20, 2025 at 3:54 AM Yes, sometimes men have too many chores as well. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler July 15, 2025 at 7:32 AM Enchanting poem with great rhyming Sara. Writing is an excellent form of release. :) Sara Kendrick July 20, 2025 at 3:53 AM I totally agree, Linda. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Anisha Dutta July 3, 2025 at 10:20 PM So nicely composed. I’m charmed. Have Good Days Sara Kendrick July 4, 2025 at 4:42 AM Why, thank you, Anisha. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

James Peranteau July 2, 2025 at 5:19 PM suhhhmbody is unleashing a storm in sheep's underwear...i were fall'n in love and then, az vesuvius whaap! I mean...(((kaboom)))...there'z artist all up in this write...Thanx...much love Sara Kendrick July 2, 2025 at 5:24 PM Why, thank you, James. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith July 2, 2025 at 2:18 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Volcanic Eruption" write. Great last line. Yes, chores go far away so we can write more. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.......... Sara Kendrick July 2, 2025 at 4:11 PM Why, thank you, Paula. The chores overtake us don't they. Sara K

Arthur Vaso July 1, 2025 at 11:40 PM Beautiful way to express these emotions! Loved this. Sara Kendrick July 2, 2025 at 2:40 AM Arthur, I am glad that you understand. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Janice Canerdy July 1, 2025 at 5:06 PM Vividly descriptive and emotional piece, Sara, one that I'm sure resonates with other poets. Sara Kendrick July 2, 2025 at 2:38 AM Thank you, Janice. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. I hope that others can see how writing helps relieve the pressure within through this work. Sara K