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Volcanic Ash

.................Several strokes were made; sharpening this shiV Sulphuric is the stench; but a sentimental heart; in its echO Heat beyond conceptualized; melted away my walL Emotions brought out in forms so basiC But evolving with flowing skills like a river of lavA Feeling this intense heat; I am a boiling cauldroN My personality is very intense; seen often as quasI Perseverance is a trait; I embrace while others mimiC Gladiatorial the battles fought; inside this arenA Fueled I am by what constitutes; life-long fireS As a cool down begins; I question; what did I accomplisH

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Paige Hind

Date: 10/27/2023 7:59:00 PM

Amazing work, A.S.! And you did the acrostic backwards...never seen that before. I can feel your intensity always in your work- keeps me coming back! Such a gifted mind; feel the lava bubble!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/27/2023 10:03:00 PM

I'm going to wear my heart on my sleeve a little bit here...... rather than make a big deal of how much this means...... there's not too many people that see what's in the landscape over the portrait....... I'm just going to say thank you! Kindly A.S.