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Voices Softly Whispered

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Snowflakes blanketed the world in winter white Tenderly, they touched my impeded ears Unlocked were the passageways to discern voices Virtuously, they repeated in soft whispers, "Wisdom is to be absorbed like flakes of snow on skin." ****************** October 5th, 2017 Let's Do Some Alphabet Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/12/2017 9:28:00 PM

Wonderfully soulful poem, Lin. The wisdom imparted in the last line is worth its weight in ink gold. Excellent thought imagery. Luminescent poetry. Love and joy always.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2017 7:21:00 AM

I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..I do enjoy the sound of snow..Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 10/12/2017 2:50:00 PM

Thanks, Sara.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/10/2017 10:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Lin - this is lovely.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/12/2017 2:50:00 PM

Thanks, Greg.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 10/10/2017 3:28:00 PM

Congrats, Lin, we tied!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2017 4:34:00 PM

Yep, we did...You, me and 380 others.

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 10/7/2017 9:49:00 PM

Poetic skill produced exquisite result. Well done, Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thank you for the fine compliment, Geoffrey.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/6/2017 11:54:00 AM

Indeed, a beautiful whispered rendition, Lin! I would like to see this one on the winners' list:) Regards // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paul. Looks like we all made 'the list,' although it doesn't quite meet the requirements of being called a winner, considering the outcome.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/6/2017 8:19:00 AM

"Tenderly, they touched my impeded ears," was my favorite line within this write, it was so very well written, with feelings squeezed within the line! I surely loved reading your delightful poem this morning! You will do well in this contest! Great Work my friend!!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/6/2017 9:39:00 AM

Just like a warmly squeezed hug, Russell? Lol Thanks for the well wishes. I appreciate them.