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Voices Softly Whispered

Snowflakes blanketed the world in winter white

Tenderly, they touched my impeded ears

Unlocked were the passageways to discern voices

Virtuously,  they repeated in soft whispers,

"Wisdom is to be absorbed like flakes of snow on skin."



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October 5th, 2017
Let's Do Some Alphabet
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2017

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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/12/2017 9:28:00 PM Wonderfully soulful poem, Lin. The wisdom imparted in the last line is worth its weight in ink gold. Excellent thought imagery. Luminescent poetry. Love and joy always. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/12/2017 7:21:00 AM I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..I do enjoy the sound of snow..Sara Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/12/2017 2:50:00 PM Thanks, Sara.

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 10/10/2017 10:44:00 PM Congrats on your win, Lin - this is lovely. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/12/2017 2:50:00 PM Thanks, Greg.

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 10/10/2017 3:28:00 PM Congrats, Lin, we tied! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/10/2017 4:34:00 PM Yep, we did...You, me and 380 others.

Geoffrey Brewer Date: 10/7/2017 9:49:00 PM Poetic skill produced exquisite result. Well done, Lin. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/10/2017 4:33:00 PM Thank you for the fine compliment, Geoffrey.

Paul Callus Date: 10/6/2017 11:54:00 AM Indeed, a beautiful whispered rendition, Lin! I would like to see this one on the winners' list:) Regards // paul Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/10/2017 4:33:00 PM Thank you very much, Paul. Looks like we all made 'the list,' although it doesn't quite meet the requirements of being called a winner, considering the outcome.

Russell Sivey Date: 10/6/2017 8:19:00 AM "Tenderly, they touched my impeded ears," was my favorite line within this write, it was so very well written, with feelings squeezed within the line! I surely loved reading your delightful poem this morning! You will do well in this contest! Great Work my friend!! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/6/2017 9:39:00 AM Just like a warmly squeezed hug, Russell? Lol Thanks for the well wishes. I appreciate them.

Charlie Smith Date: 10/5/2017 3:05:00 PM Lovely Lin, "repeated in soft whispers", lovely Lin... Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/5/2017 3:17:00 PM Your sweet comments are appreciated very much, Charlie. Thank you.

Darren White Date: 10/5/2017 10:32:00 AM Wonderful ABC, and great last line, Lin. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Darren White Date: 10/6/2017 4:31:00 AM De rien, ma chérie ;) Lin Lane Date: 10/5/2017 10:39:00 AM Merci, merci, Monsieur Blanc!

Heidi Sands Date: 10/5/2017 9:40:00 AM Wow very nice Lin. I enjoyed this today :) Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/5/2017 10:09:00 AM Thanks a bunch, Heidi.

Tim Smith Date: 10/5/2017 8:26:00 AM Wisdom has melted into your soul... lovely write Lin Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/5/2017 8:29:00 AM Those are quite lovely comments, and ones taken into my heart. Thank you, Tim.