Lin Lane Poet ABC

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Voices Softly Whispered

Snowflakes blanketed the world in winter white

Tenderly, they touched my impeded ears

Unlocked were the passageways to discern voices

Virtuously,  they repeated in soft whispers,

"Wisdom is to be absorbed like flakes of snow on skin."



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October 5th, 2017
Let's Do Some Alphabet
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 12, 2017 at 9:28 PM Wonderfully soulful poem, Lin. The wisdom imparted in the last line is worth its weight in ink gold. Excellent thought imagery. Luminescent poetry. Love and joy always.

Sara Kendrick October 12, 2017 at 7:21 AM I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..I do enjoy the sound of snow..Sara Lin Lane October 12, 2017 at 2:50 PM Thanks, Sara.

Gregory Richard Barden October 10, 2017 at 10:44 PM Congrats on your win, Lin - this is lovely. Lin Lane October 12, 2017 at 2:50 PM Thanks, Greg.

Dale Gregory Cozart October 10, 2017 at 3:28 PM Congrats, Lin, we tied! Lin Lane October 10, 2017 at 4:34 PM Yep, we did...You, me and 380 others.

Geoffrey Brewer October 7, 2017 at 9:49 PM Poetic skill produced exquisite result. Well done, Lin. Lin Lane October 10, 2017 at 4:33 PM Thank you for the fine compliment, Geoffrey.

Paul Callus October 6, 2017 at 11:54 AM Indeed, a beautiful whispered rendition, Lin! I would like to see this one on the winners' list:) Regards // paul Lin Lane October 10, 2017 at 4:33 PM Thank you very much, Paul. Looks like we all made 'the list,' although it doesn't quite meet the requirements of being called a winner, considering the outcome.

Russell Sivey October 6, 2017 at 8:19 AM "Tenderly, they touched my impeded ears," was my favorite line within this write, it was so very well written, with feelings squeezed within the line! I surely loved reading your delightful poem this morning! You will do well in this contest! Great Work my friend!! Lin Lane October 6, 2017 at 9:39 AM Just like a warmly squeezed hug, Russell? Lol Thanks for the well wishes. I appreciate them.

Charlie Smith October 5, 2017 at 3:05 PM Lovely Lin, "repeated in soft whispers", lovely Lin... Lin Lane October 5, 2017 at 3:17 PM Your sweet comments are appreciated very much, Charlie. Thank you.

Darren White October 5, 2017 at 10:32 AM Wonderful ABC, and great last line, Lin. Good luck in the contest. Darren White October 6, 2017 at 4:31 AM De rien, ma chérie ;) Lin Lane October 5, 2017 at 10:39 AM Merci, merci, Monsieur Blanc!

Heidi Sands October 5, 2017 at 9:40 AM Wow very nice Lin. I enjoyed this today :) Lin Lane October 5, 2017 at 10:09 AM Thanks a bunch, Heidi.

Tim Smith October 5, 2017 at 8:26 AM Wisdom has melted into your soul... lovely write Lin Lin Lane October 5, 2017 at 8:29 AM Those are quite lovely comments, and ones taken into my heart. Thank you, Tim.