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When I wrote this I originally meant for it to be a tanka poem.  Which was my first poemTHE VOICE OF WATER.  AS MY LUCK GOES..it  was a title to somebody else's poem. Can't have that.  So I rewrote the poem  and changed the title  to. Now  it's  two instead.

Voices of a Waterfall

Trickle trickle ting
I am tapping the shy window pane
Whispering water whisper rain
Listen as they sing my  name
Thunderous voices of Angels

Waters deep in my  tenacious 
Destiny lay in wait my threshold
Thrashes crashing feet below rushing
river,  aah, a waterfall I FLOW
Unabated, waterfall I AM......FREE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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