Voices of a Waterfall

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When I wrote this I originally meant for it to be a tanka poem. Which was my first poemTHE VOICE OF WATER. AS MY LUCK GOES..it was a title to somebody else's poem. Can't have that. So I rewrote the poem and changed the title to. Now it's two instead.

Trickle trickle ting I am tapping the shy window pane Whispering water whisper rain Listen as they sing my name Thunderous voices of Angels Waters deep in my tenacious Destiny lay in wait my threshold Thrashes crashing feet below rushing river, aah, a waterfall I FLOW Unabated, waterfall I AM......FREE

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