Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Voices In My Head -

Silence
                                                  no pain -
                                              Inside the eye
                                              of a tornado,
                                           my hallucinations

                                              Is this death?
                                          So bury me quickly
                                   free me from this nightmare

                                        Thoughts no one hears
                                        The voices in my head
                                             slowly creeps in
                                            A cheerful parade
                                            a choir of angels
                                                  I guess

                                    And for a moment I believe
                                              this is the end
                                          I have to be strong
                                    and escape from this dream

                                     In the glow of a silver star
                                         The voice is still there
                                      ... and it's yours, my dear








02.12.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Voices .... Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
1st place in the contest

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Funom Makama December 18, 2018 at 10:45 AM Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend. Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2018 at 1:28 PM - Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Funom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi December 14, 2018 at 10:34 PM Truly beautiful... congratulations... Happy Holidays Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2018 at 12:39 PM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit December 10, 2018 at 7:13 AM Back with congrats for the #1 spot on the winning chart..well done, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2018 at 1:44 PM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire December 9, 2018 at 1:44 AM Oooh, that last line packs a powerful punch, Sunshine. I'm so glad I had the opportunity to read this -- I think it's one of your best and so deserving of its win. Congratulations, Hon! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2018 at 12:29 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper December 8, 2018 at 11:00 PM Back with congratulations on your win.. Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2018 at 12:29 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May December 8, 2018 at 6:04 PM Congrats on a great win Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2018 at 12:29 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One December 8, 2018 at 10:05 AM We all need that reassuring voice during adversity.. Love how you did this poem Anne Lise... Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2018 at 12:28 AM - Many thanks for my 1st place in the contest, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter December 3, 2018 at 8:36 PM Love this, especially the way it ended. Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2018 at 11:56 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith December 3, 2018 at 11:52 AM What a lovely thought from a thoughtfully lovely person... Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2018 at 12:35 PM - Charlie, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus December 3, 2018 at 10:10 AM A creative and lovely take on this contest theme, Anne-Lise. Regards & Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2018 at 12:34 PM - Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May December 3, 2018 at 9:53 AM Very nicely penned Anne..hugs Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2018 at 12:34 PM - Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues December 3, 2018 at 5:58 AM Wonderfully written and nice pic, sweet Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2018 at 6:29 AM - Hi Kim, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 3, 2018 at 5:35 AM Phantasmagorical poem filled with profound rapturous ideas masterfully done dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck. Hugs xxx Demetrios Trifiatis December 4, 2018 at 6:00 AM It is a Greek word which means extremely beautiful ! Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2018 at 5:49 AM - "Phantasmagorical" sounds great ... but I do not know what that means :)) - Many thanks for your visit and your comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robertina B. December 2, 2018 at 10:12 PM Really enjoyed your free verse, Sunshine.. Absolutely wonderful!! Photo is adorable.. Many blessings to you!! Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2018 at 11:42 PM - Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Robertina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper December 2, 2018 at 8:30 PM I enjoyed reading this well descriptive and well written poem that arouses strong emotions because of its beauty. Good luck in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2018 at 11:42 PM - Eve, many thanks for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit December 2, 2018 at 2:57 PM Glad to know the voices were friendly. Good theme for the contest, Anne-Lise. All the best..you have my vote for a win. Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2018 at 11:40 PM - Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud December 2, 2018 at 2:09 PM tugging at the heartstrings; so tenderly imparted, anne... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2018 at 2:17 PM - Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael December 2, 2018 at 1:57 PM At sundown when shadows appear dreams escape pass pillars of night where real is imaginary and imaginary real and voices trigger our senses...interacting on different planes... Opps...what was I doing...I like the write...it made me think of possibilities...All the best Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2018 at 2:02 PM - Shadows often appear in our dreams, Arturo :) - Many thanks for your visit and your thoughtful comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham December 2, 2018 at 1:25 PM Great take on the theme Sunshine, good luck. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2018 at 1:56 PM - Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)