Voices

Our newborn baby boy 
he appeared just like a miracle
He landed from another world 
our darling extra-terrestrial 

Gazing through those bright blue eyes
like glistening stars in heavenly skies
And speaking with his unique voice
lifting our spirits; oh how we rejoiced

For slowly, softly one by one
across the years words start to come
So full of life our dear sweet boy
Each day I’m filled with utter joy

Such challenges ahead of him
He has no fear; he cannot hear
To speak words he has never heard
such words must be deciphered first

He speaks in signs most of the time
watching their lips when they speak
Words they say he tries to repeat
turning their words into sounds unique

Our darling boy is now a man
and working hard, does all he can
Instilled in him all dreams to chase
Be kind, be gentle to the human race

Then on this most momentous day
Looking skywards I start to pray
The sun rises high in an azure sky
My time is up; my time to die

Gently he kissed me with tears in his eyes
so sad to watch his mother’s demise
Whispering words so fresh, so new
I hear his voice saying ‘I love you’

1st December 2018
Competition: Voices
Sponsor: Silent One
2nd placement

Contest Strand Choice 3
Sponsor Brian Strand 
HONORABLE MENTION
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Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:10 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Ann :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 1:46 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your lovely message and I wish the same to you and your dearest too. Kindest Christmas thoughts Ann xx
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Enjoyed reading this nicely done write , Ann,our children our love. Congratulations on your win..
Gilmour Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Thank you Eve for your congrats, and so glad you enjoyed my poem. Kindest thoughts Ann x
One Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 10:21 AM
What a profound take on the contest Ann... Every son will relate to this one who has lost his mum... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Gilmour Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 3:30 PM
Thank you so much Silent One, I really appreciate your lovely comments and my placement in your competition was the icing on the cake! Kindest thoughts Ann x
Krutsinger Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Ah, that is a beautiful write. It turned in such a subtle, sweet way from life to death, but two different people's. So close the baby-mama bond, it seemed so natural. Well done my friend!
Gilmour Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 2:13 AM
Wow, thanks so much Caren, I always appreciate you comments and thank you for them. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Michael Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Nice...I like the concept, how you wrote about yourself, talking from the here after...All the best Ann
Gilmour Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Thank you so much Arturo for your welcome comments, kindest thoughts Ann x
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