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Voices

Our newborn baby boy he appeared just like a miracle He landed from another world our darling extra-terrestrial Gazing through those bright blue eyes like glistening stars in heavenly skies And speaking with his unique voice lifting our spirits; oh how we rejoiced For slowly, softly one by one across the years words start to come So full of life our dear sweet boy Each day I’m filled with utter joy Such challenges ahead of him He has no fear; he cannot hear To speak words he has never heard such words must be deciphered first He speaks in signs most of the time watching their lips when they speak Words they say he tries to repeat turning their words into sounds unique Our darling boy is now a man and working hard, does all he can Instilled in him all dreams to chase Be kind, be gentle to the human race Then on this most momentous day Looking skywards I start to pray The sun rises high in an azure sky My time is up; my time to die Gently he kissed me with tears in his eyes so sad to watch his mother’s demise Whispering words so fresh, so new I hear his voice saying ‘I love you’ 1st December 2018 Competition: Voices Sponsor: Silent One 2nd placement Contest Strand Choice 3 Sponsor Brian Strand HONORABLE MENTION

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Date: 12/10/2018 12:10:00 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Ann :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/10/2018 1:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your lovely message and I wish the same to you and your dearest too. Kindest Christmas thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/8/2018 11:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this nicely done write , Ann,our children our love. Congratulations on your win..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/9/2018 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Eve for your congrats, and so glad you enjoyed my poem. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 12/8/2018 10:21:00 AM
What a profound take on the contest Ann... Every son will relate to this one who has lost his mum... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/9/2018 3:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent One, I really appreciate your lovely comments and my placement in your competition was the icing on the cake! Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 12/1/2018 10:03:00 PM
Ah, that is a beautiful write. It turned in such a subtle, sweet way from life to death, but two different people's. So close the baby-mama bond, it seemed so natural. Well done my friend!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/2/2018 2:13:00 AM
Wow, thanks so much Caren, I always appreciate you comments and thank you for them. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 12/1/2018 6:20:00 PM
Nice...I like the concept, how you wrote about yourself, talking from the here after...All the best Ann
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/1/2018 6:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Arturo for your welcome comments, kindest thoughts Ann x

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