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Voice of the Storm My grandmother said, “Be still. God’s speaking through the storm,” as she went throughout to see if lights or TV was on. The white glare was clue to how fortissimo he will speak. Atomic flash sent you in hiding afraid to take a peek. He was a kettle drum, a boisterous timpani from the sky, and with reverberation, he commanded from on high. Angrier, angrier and deeper were the rolls, with each one’s vibration delving finer into souls. His bark was often fearsome, as someone had done wrong, and oh so still you’d sit if the reprimand was strong. Twenty minutes or thirty was the duration of the scold. When doors and windows rattled, you knew you’d been told. Each time he was less mad and softer were his words, soon moving far away, leaving sun and song of birds. After all is said and done a rainbow bright appears, a promise that God loves us and there is no need for fears. 8/14/16 YOUR BEST RHYMING COUPLET' Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Date: 8/18/2016 8:30:00 PM
I love this poem , Janis, I am a person that is very afraid of thunder and this really inspires me to see it in a different light. A 7 and a fav. congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/18/2016 9:37:00 PM
Thanks for the rating and the fav. I'm glad I can spread a thought about our Lord and his majesty.
Date: 8/18/2016 12:03:00 AM
It's really heart touching. Loved reading it. Congrats on your win Janis.
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Date: 8/18/2016 12:29:00 PM
Thanks so much for stopping by.....I appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/17/2016 1:01:00 PM
I am not keen on storms, Janis, but I did not mind participating in yours! Beautiful! My mother used to say that God uses a storm to remind us that he is still around, in case we forget! Love your ending. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/17/2016 3:12:00 PM
Paul, it seems like you were raised with some of the same religious beliefs I was. Even as an adult, I still respect God in the storm. I am deeply encouraged by your comments, as always.
Date: 8/15/2016 4:48:00 AM
What a way to describe a thunderstorm:)
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Date: 8/15/2016 1:28:00 PM
Thanks.....

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