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solitude descending over mountains at tangerine dusk, a mellifluous Nightingale perched among green foliage and tender twigs, crooned the most graceful sonata of happiness and sorrow. sprinkling amber passion, it sang a symphony of love, pouring its heart, weaving the story of eternal lovers longing for each other. mesmerizing the audience with lavender dreams and hopes, a dazed forest stood still ... Robin, and Oriole, and Red Breasted Blackbird joined its perfect cadence with delightful rhapsody of their own, tiniest Hummingbird chirped the sweetest song of the forest, the landscape turned into a perfect rendezvous of songbirds, captivating entranced creatures amongst tallest trees, shrubs and bushes, emanating lemon scent, misty breeze rippling from birds’ wings, smelt saffron fragrance, a chartreuse waterfalls falling on coral rocks, and. gentle strokes of raindrops created  a magical stream of melody, gossamer mauve sunset twilight turned the vista into a haven for musician birds to celebrate purity and harmonious blessings of nature. May 8, 2021 SECOND PLACE Inspired by " Nature" Premiere Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina Mcintosh

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Date: 5/13/2021 6:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this tremendous piece. Blessings Rick.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/13/2021 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Rick. Really appreciate your awesome comment. BW ~ Mala
Date: 5/12/2021 11:24:00 AM
Mala, congratulations on your win with your colorful panoramic view of sunset in the colors of nature. So creative dear friend! So many amazing images. I love the way you blended the sunset colors into a picture and the songs of birds at sunset - the final song to the day! So well done! Blessings and a loving hug!
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Date: 5/13/2021 3:36:00 PM
Dear Sam, thank you so very much. Delighted to have such beautiful comments from you. I enjoy your poems, and always get inspired. Love and blessings ~ Mala
Date: 5/11/2021 11:51:00 PM
This is a beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2021 4:13:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Friend. Really appreciate.
Date: 5/11/2021 11:04:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me enjoy wondrously the beauty of nature while virtually awed by its voice. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-concluded contest. God bless you.
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Date: 5/12/2021 4:15:00 PM
Thank you, Beata. Really appreciate your inspiring comments. Your poems are full of kindness and serenity. Love ~ Mala
Date: 5/11/2021 7:09:00 PM
Dear Mala, it is with great pleasure that I return with my heartiest congratulations for your excellent placement in Regina's contest. Your exceptional and vivid artistry shines, my sweet and talented friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/12/2021 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. I am honoured to be placed along with talented poets like you. Love ~ Mala
Date: 5/11/2021 4:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning entry in the Nature contest. God bless you always. Love this poem. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/12/2021 4:16:00 PM
Dear Regina, thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your inspiring contest. Really appreciate. Love ~ Mala
Date: 5/9/2021 12:32:00 PM
Hello Mala, Happy Mother's Day. This poem is beautifully done. It will be my fav. Love & friendship Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/9/2021 3:38:00 PM
Hello Mala, did you have a good Mother's Day? I am only a Godmother. I never had children. We are in for a longer lockdown now. Also we have to wear the ma\sk until December 31st. love & Friendship Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/9/2021 2:50:00 PM
Dear Darlene, thank you so much. Glad that you enjoyed the poem. Happy Mother's Day to You, My Sweet Friend. Love and Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 5/8/2021 9:00:00 PM
My dear Mala, the beauty of your poem caresses my senses with birdsong, colors and saffron scents. Splendid and serene textures touch my being and bring me to the center of this exquisite haven of nature. Inspiriting imagery, dear poetess. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes and hugs for you.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/9/2021 7:07:00 AM
I truly appreciate your lovely poetic presence, my dear friend. It is so wonderful to enjoy your vibrant artistry, as we learn from each other and grow with each other, in this inspiring garden of planted words and harvested beauty. Your poetry lifts the heart and soul. Happy Mother’s Day to you, my sweet friend.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/9/2021 6:50:00 AM
Dear Susan, I am so delighted you read this poem, and with your golden pen, commented on it. Your inspiring comments mean a lot in my journey. I am fortunate to be in the community of talented poets like you, and have the opportunity to learn. Love and hugs ~ Mala
Date: 5/8/2021 8:38:00 PM
I love it, and Regina's going to love it too, I just know. Everly line graced with the perfume of Nature's finest blessing. Life and Living, Gershon
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/9/2021 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Your inspiring comments and assurance from a talented poet like you, mean a lot in my journey. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Date: 5/8/2021 8:12:00 PM
I smell the fragrance emanating from your forest dear Mala. And i could hear the voices of nature through your vivid descriptions with fine imagery. Best wishes.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/9/2021 6:45:00 AM
Thank you, Dear JCB. Really appreciate your beautiful comments. Love ~ Mala