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Voice of Nature

solitude descending over mountains at tangerine dusk,
  a mellifluous Nightingale perched among green foliage and tender twigs,
           crooned nature's most graceful sonata of happiness and sorrow.
            sprinkling amber passion, it sang a symphony of love,
 pouring its heart, weaving the story of eternal lovers longing for each other.
           mesmerizing the audience with lavender dreams and hopes,
                                   a dazed forest stood still ...

               Robin, and Oriole, and Red Breasted Blackbird joined
            its perfect cadence with delightful rhapsody of their own,
         tiniest Hummingbird chirped the sweetest song of the forest,
         the landscape turned into a perfect rendezvous of songbirds,
              captivating entranced creatures amongst tallest trees,
                     shrubs and bushes, emanating lemon scent,

          misty breeze rippling from birds’ wings, smelt saffron fragrance,
                   a chartreuse waterfalls falling on coral rocks, and.
         gentle strokes of raindrops created  a magical stream of melody,
                  gossamer mauve sunset twilight turned the vista 
                             into a haven for musician birds
                to celebrate purity and harmonious blessings of nature.


                                                   May 8, 2021
                                                 SECOND PLACE
                                     Original Title: Voice Of Nature
                        Inspired by " Nature" Premiere Poetry Contest
                                           Sponsor: Regina Mcintosh

                                         
                                                    FIRST PLACE
                                   For "N" Old Or New Poetry Contest
                                      Sponsor: Constance La France

                                      For Strand 1050 Poetry Contest
                                          Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Mala, back with a colorful confetti of congratulations, high fives and three cheers for another win with this lovely, delicately written poem framing the sunset in all of its magnificence! It is just lovely dear friend. Hugs and much love.
La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my N contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing, beautiful image ~ love and serenity _Constance
Lamoureux Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Congrats on your win with this tremendous piece. Blessings Rick.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:37 PM
Thank you, Rick. Really appreciate your awesome comment. BW ~ Mala
Kauffman Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Mala, congratulations on your win with your colorful panoramic view of sunset in the colors of nature. So creative dear friend! So many amazing images. I love the way you blended the sunset colors into a picture and the songs of birds at sunset - the final song to the day! So well done! Blessings and a loving hug!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:36 PM
Dear Sam, thank you so very much. Delighted to have such beautiful comments from you. I enjoy your poems, and always get inspired. Love and blessings ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 11:51 PM
This is a beautiful work. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Thank you, Dear Friend. Really appreciate.
Agustin Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 11:04 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me enjoy wondrously the beauty of nature while virtually awed by its voice. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-concluded contest. God bless you.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Thank you, Beata. Really appreciate your inspiring comments. Your poems are full of kindness and serenity. Love ~ Mala
Mcintosh Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Congratulations on your winning entry in the Nature contest. God bless you always. Love this poem. Love, Gina
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Dear Regina, thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your inspiring contest. Really appreciate. Love ~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Hello Mala, Happy Mother's Day. This poem is beautifully done. It will be my fav. Love & friendship Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Hello Mala, did you have a good Mother's Day? I am only a Godmother. I never had children. We are in for a longer lockdown now. Also we have to wear the ma\sk until December 31st. love & Friendship Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 2:50 PM
Dear Darlene, thank you so much. Glad that you enjoyed the poem. Happy Mother's Day to You, My Sweet Friend. Love and Hugs ~ Mala
Wolf Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 8:38 PM
I love it, and Regina's going to love it too, I just know. Everly line graced with the perfume of Nature's finest blessing. Life and Living, Gershon
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Your inspiring comments and assurance from a talented poet like you, mean a lot in my journey. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Brul Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 8:12 PM
I smell the fragrance emanating from your forest dear Mala. And i could hear the voices of nature through your vivid descriptions with fine imagery. Best wishes.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Thank you, Dear JCB. Really appreciate your beautiful comments. Love ~ Mala
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