Voice

I heard a voice 
That calls in whisper 
So strong in choice 
In ringing glitter 
Stone words 
Lays humble right 
Like silver swords 
Protected light 
Its flame 
Burn all around 
To be the same 
In timing found 
For being heard 
Becoming real 
It was a word 
A word that heal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Cathey Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Great write...David.
Popkova Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 12:45 AM
Thank you
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 1:19 PM
This piece flows wonderfully. Nice write.
Popkova Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 12:46 AM
Thank you
A   Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 12:09 AM
Evgenia Popkova, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Popkova Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 5:33 AM
Hello nice to meet new friends here with warm greetings thank you. Long time I read much poems here but write just recently with inspire thank for one person. I just express my feelings and thoughts like this without knowing much about style and so on shame on me ?? once more thank you
A  Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Evgenia, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
Popkova Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 5:17 AM
Hello and thank you for greetings glad to be here and share my thoughts. Always welcome to read and tell honest opinion. Happy have new friends here :-)
A  Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Wow, this is an awesome first post. Skat
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