Vivacious Lily

Vivacious Lily She took on cruise plenty souls Merry they danced with joy Glimpse of her dissolved all woes When she smiled and blushed with coy Spread her scent in verdant valley Sweetness infinite! Smitten by her poise and piety Descended moon from sky Shining bright, beside the pool he asked Will you be my wife?!
18th October 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/19/2016 10:08:00 AM
I see nothing more attractive than a blushing face:) Such is your attractive Lily, Anu! I note that you consider the moon to be a male, same as in my country, whereas many other see it as a female. ~ Regards // paul
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/20/2016 8:56:00 AM
Sun is also male here in India...:)
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/19/2016 1:44:00 PM
....and I presume that the sun is female :)
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/19/2016 10:29:00 AM
Dear Paul, your visit is so pleasant! your appreciation always gladdens me! yes we consider Moon to be a male..... thanks again// love, Anu:)
Date: 10/19/2016 5:17:00 AM
Awesome personification Anu. It's always a pleasure reading your work and this was no exception. Keep writing. :)
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/19/2016 6:21:00 AM
Dear Manoj, your visit is so pleasant! your appreciation always gladdens me!So sweet of you:) thanks again// love, Anu:)
Date: 10/18/2016 4:04:00 PM
this is really sweet. I love the title and how you made her vivacious!
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/19/2016 6:16:00 AM
Dear Andrea,I love lilies , they bring lot of zing! your visit is so pleasant! your appreciation always gladdens me! thanks again// love and hugs, Anu:)
Date: 10/18/2016 12:22:00 PM
aww how sweet and romantic Anu! This is the perfect personification. Good luck! :)-luloo
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Anu Nayak
Date: 10/18/2016 12:25:00 PM
Dear Luloo, your visit is so pleasant!Thank you dear for your sweet wishes, your appreciation always gladdens me! thanks again// love and hugs, Anu:)
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