Anu Nayak Poet Personification

Vivacious Lily

Vivacious Lily 

She took on cruise plenty souls
Merry they danced with joy
Glimpse of her dissolved all woes
When she smiled and blushed with coy
Spread her scent in verdant valley
Sweetness infinite!
Smitten by her poise and piety
Descended moon from sky
Shining bright, beside the pool he asked
Will you be my wife?!



18th October 2016

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Paul Callus October 19, 2016 at 10:08 AM I see nothing more attractive than a blushing face:) Such is your attractive Lily, Anu! I note that you consider the moon to be a male, same as in my country, whereas many other see it as a female. ~ Regards // paul Anu Nayak October 20, 2016 at 8:56 AM Sun is also male here in India...:) Paul Callus October 19, 2016 at 1:44 PM ....and I presume that the sun is female :) Anu Nayak October 19, 2016 at 10:29 AM Dear Paul, your visit is so pleasant! your appreciation always gladdens me! yes we consider Moon to be a male..... thanks again// love, Anu:)

Manoj Kumar October 19, 2016 at 5:17 AM Awesome personification Anu. It's always a pleasure reading your work and this was no exception. Keep writing. :) Anu Nayak October 19, 2016 at 6:21 AM Dear Manoj, your visit is so pleasant! your appreciation always gladdens me!So sweet of you:) thanks again// love, Anu:)

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2016 at 4:04 PM this is really sweet. I love the title and how you made her vivacious! Anu Nayak October 19, 2016 at 6:16 AM Dear Andrea,I love lilies , they bring lot of zing! your visit is so pleasant! your appreciation always gladdens me! thanks again// love and hugs, Anu:)

Beautiful Scars October 18, 2016 at 12:22 PM aww how sweet and romantic Anu! This is the perfect personification. Good luck! :)-luloo Anu Nayak October 18, 2016 at 12:25 PM Dear Luloo, your visit is so pleasant!Thank you dear for your sweet wishes, your appreciation always gladdens me! thanks again// love and hugs, Anu:)