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Visiting Our Jack

Might be heading up north, scary I know Land of milk and honey, that's where I'll go I'll meet Santa Jack Go check out his shack So ladies beware, you'll need to lay low

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Carol Eastman

Date: 7/21/2015 9:39:00 AM

Little Timmy Smith is all grown up... But he still knows how to play when Santa Jack is about, Yup!... Just leave a few bread crumbs so we can follow, you... So we can join in the fun that you and Santa Jack can brew!... Um... Think I need another cup of coffee... Loved your Limmerick... Keep that up and we'll be calling you LimmerTim! LOL...

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 5:21:00 PM

enjoyed this limerick

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/19/2015 11:27:00 AM

:-))) Very nice and cool thing to hang out with Santa. Plenty of limericks must come from it then. Enjoy!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/19/2015 9:47:00 AM

Great Limerick my friend, Tim. Jack certainly will appreciate and the ladies too since they would like to ask Santa Jack one thing or two!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/19/2015 12:37:00 AM

G'day Tim... I can imagine the limerick war that will explode after you two have been out on the town - Lindsay

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/18/2015 11:17:00 PM

Love the humour in this Tim! Envy envy envy !!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2015 7:41:00 PM

hey are you REALLY gonna go visit him? That would be so cool for you two to meet up!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/18/2015 3:32:00 PM

Hey ladies ..of the north...Tim is coming to town..Id better start searching for a wedding present...Oh an invitation is already sent to all ..Lovely limerick Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 3:35:00 PM

That is Jack's harem that needs to lay low cause he is having visitors.lol...I'm a one woman man... Thanks Charma

Theresa Cw

Date: 7/18/2015 3:31:00 PM

What a thoughtful limerick of our dear Santa Jack, hope your visit goes real smooth.

Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 3:44:00 PM

Thanks Theresa have to plan to take my boys to a ball game up there.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2015 3:25:00 PM

oh what a wonderful meeting that would be lol - think you need to put an open invite out to all soupers lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 3:43:00 PM

I think Jack has invited many already

Constance La France

Date: 7/18/2015 2:47:00 PM

Tim, nice limerick, a super 7, and thanks for visiting my hydro-licious poem , that was so much fun

Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 3:42:00 PM

Thanks Constance

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/18/2015 2:04:00 PM

Meet you at the border!!! That would be fantastic if it ever happened! Actually met Mystic Rose (Vienna) and her husband Aldo, about a month ago! We live only about 25 miles apart! Two two super nice people! Cheers!

Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 2:07:00 PM

I'll have to plan a weekend next year when the Whitesox come up to play