Visiting Our Jack

Might be heading up north, scary I know Land of milk and honey, that's where I'll go I'll meet Santa Jack Go check out his shack So ladies beware, you'll need to lay low
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/21/2015 9:39:00 AM
Little Timmy Smith is all grown up... But he still knows how to play when Santa Jack is about, Yup!... Just leave a few bread crumbs so we can follow, you... So we can join in the fun that you and Santa Jack can brew!... Um... Think I need another cup of coffee... Loved your Limmerick... Keep that up and we'll be calling you LimmerTim! LOL...
Login to Reply
Date: 7/19/2015 5:21:00 PM
enjoyed this limerick
Login to Reply
Date: 7/19/2015 11:27:00 AM
:-))) Very nice and cool thing to hang out with Santa. Plenty of limericks must come from it then. Enjoy!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/19/2015 9:47:00 AM
Great Limerick my friend, Tim. Jack certainly will appreciate and the ladies too since they would like to ask Santa Jack one thing or two!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/19/2015 12:37:00 AM
G'day Tim... I can imagine the limerick war that will explode after you two have been out on the town - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2015 11:17:00 PM
Love the humour in this Tim! Envy envy envy !!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2015 7:41:00 PM
hey are you REALLY gonna go visit him? That would be so cool for you two to meet up!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2015 3:32:00 PM
Hey ladies ..of the north...Tim is coming to town..Id better start searching for a wedding present...Oh an invitation is already sent to all ..Lovely limerick Tim
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 3:35:00 PM
That is Jack's harem that needs to lay low cause he is having visitors.lol...I'm a one woman man... Thanks Charma
Date: 7/18/2015 3:31:00 PM
What a thoughtful limerick of our dear Santa Jack, hope your visit goes real smooth.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Theresa have to plan to take my boys to a ball game up there.
Date: 7/18/2015 3:25:00 PM
oh what a wonderful meeting that would be lol - think you need to put an open invite out to all soupers lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 3:43:00 PM
I think Jack has invited many already
Date: 7/18/2015 2:47:00 PM
Tim, nice limerick, a super 7, and thanks for visiting my hydro-licious poem , that was so much fun
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 3:42:00 PM
Thanks Constance
Date: 7/18/2015 2:04:00 PM
Meet you at the border!!! That would be fantastic if it ever happened! Actually met Mystic Rose (Vienna) and her husband Aldo, about a month ago! We live only about 25 miles apart! Two two super nice people! Cheers!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2015 2:07:00 PM
I'll have to plan a weekend next year when the Whitesox come up to play
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter