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Visiting Our Jack

Might be heading up north, scary I know
Land of milk and honey, that's where I'll go
I'll meet Santa Jack
Go check out his shack
So ladies beware, you'll need to lay low

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Carol Eastman

July 21, 2015 at 9:39 AM

Little Timmy Smith is all grown up... But he still knows how to play when Santa Jack is about, Yup!... Just leave a few bread crumbs so we can follow, you... So we can join in the fun that you and Santa Jack can brew!... Um... Think I need another cup of coffee... Loved your Limmerick... Keep that up and we'll be calling you LimmerTim! LOL...

Skat A

July 19, 2015 at 5:21 PM

enjoyed this limerick

Kp Nunez

July 19, 2015 at 11:27 AM

:-))) Very nice and cool thing to hang out with Santa. Plenty of limericks must come from it then. Enjoy!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 19, 2015 at 9:47 AM

Great Limerick my friend, Tim. Jack certainly will appreciate and the ladies too since they would like to ask Santa Jack one thing or two!

Lindsay Laurie

July 19, 2015 at 12:37 AM

G'day Tim... I can imagine the limerick war that will explode after you two have been out on the town - Lindsay

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 18, 2015 at 11:17 PM

Love the humour in this Tim! Envy envy envy !!

Andrea Dietrich

July 18, 2015 at 7:41 PM

hey are you REALLY gonna go visit him? That would be so cool for you two to meet up!!

Charmaine Chircop

July 18, 2015 at 3:32 PM

Hey ladies ..of the north...Tim is coming to town..Id better start searching for a wedding present...Oh an invitation is already sent to all ..Lovely limerick Tim

Tim Smith

July 18, 2015 at 3:35 PM

That is Jack's harem that needs to lay low cause he is having visitors.lol...I'm a one woman man... Thanks Charma

Theresa Cw

July 18, 2015 at 3:31 PM

What a thoughtful limerick of our dear Santa Jack, hope your visit goes real smooth.

Tim Smith

July 18, 2015 at 3:44 PM

Thanks Theresa have to plan to take my boys to a ball game up there.

Jan Allison

July 18, 2015 at 3:25 PM

oh what a wonderful meeting that would be lol - think you need to put an open invite out to all soupers lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

July 18, 2015 at 3:43 PM

I think Jack has invited many already

Constance La France

July 18, 2015 at 2:47 PM

Tim, nice limerick, a super 7, and thanks for visiting my hydro-licious poem , that was so much fun

Tim Smith

July 18, 2015 at 3:42 PM

Thanks Constance

Jack Ellison

July 18, 2015 at 2:04 PM

Meet you at the border!!! That would be fantastic if it ever happened! Actually met Mystic Rose (Vienna) and her husband Aldo, about a month ago! We live only about 25 miles apart! Two two super nice people! Cheers!

Tim Smith

July 18, 2015 at 2:07 PM

I'll have to plan a weekend next year when the Whitesox come up to play

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