Visiting Hours Over

Just sitting, I'm  knitting,  dreaming as fan blades idle
slowly with an incoming wind.  The hands circle the clock
marking the passage of time into soundless history.

It is late, almost eight, a nurse appears at the door -
"Time to leave pretty soon." My hands cradle his face
as I kiss the salty brow of his altered memory.

Tears flowing, I'm going; our eyes meet and we soul mates
sing a hymn together.  The dream is understood
by musician and poet.  Rhythm has struck the right keys.

What's more, in close rapport,  his lips form - a mute "Bye, Bye."
With a rare smile, he leaves me.  I watch the fan blades reverse.
My prayers answered - escorted  by a faint, outgoing breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Nair Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 12:54 AM
Reason, it is such a nice piece of work, i like it !! Jag
Hamilton Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 5:17 PM
really enjoyed this TFS well expressed Shadow x smiles
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Reason, this is really a great poem that you penned. One of your best!
Pettit Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 11:31 PM
Nice write. For correct grammar purposes, just change "slow" at the start of your second line to "slowly". You need an adverb there in lieu of an adjective.
Gabriella Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 10:35 PM
I really like this. Great job!
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