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Visiting Alcatraz

Visiting a prison Gives a tiny little taste Of how a convict takes his life And has it all erased. From walking in the open air To confines of a cell Must feel like stepping off a cliff Into a living hell. No privacy or room to move, No access to the sky; Each prisoner must sit and ask Himself one question - why? For nothing could be worth the price That person's gone and paid, As memories of friends and family Slowly start to fade. Though Alcatraz is empty now, So many jails are filled, The penance for assorted crimes And vengeance for those killed. If criminals could only see The future they might face, Perhaps they wouldn't find themselves In such a somber place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/8/2013 12:08:00 PM
Fading family and friends. Is the epitimy of how their life now ends. That should be read by all to see. Before they violate you and me. Peace.
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Date: 4/6/2013 5:21:00 PM
btw, I saw this place in the 80's. it was a cool tour. Loved the Alcatraz movies too.
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Date: 4/6/2013 5:20:00 PM
this makes me wish that prisons were like this one again. Instead of giving them a paid vacation and free health care that I cannot even afford!! Good one!
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Date: 4/6/2013 2:00:00 PM
Just a year ago....we took a tour of Alcatraz while visiting our son who lives near San Francisco......it is quite a chilling reminder of how "crime does not pay!:"
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Date: 4/6/2013 12:04:00 PM
The needless, cruel fate of many... well expressed... Terry
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Date: 4/6/2013 10:13:00 AM
What a message, what a poem. Love your wit. Great poem.
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