Visit To the Creek

wow. all this ABC from that one night events. Good one, Carolyn!

Congrats Carolyn on your HM in the ABC contest with this wonderful poem ..enjoy your honor.. luv.. Linda-Marie

congrats

Mamma mia , great piece of work! Really liked the minimalist word approach irish

Carolyn, My love, this is an excellent example of this style. It was a joy to read. Keep it up.

Nicely done! I enjoyed reading your poem. -Susan Mills

A witty use of the whole alphabete to convey your story of your visit to the creek Carolyn. Thanks for your most gracious coments. Agape, Moses

I really enjoyed this poem. I was sitting on my front porch tonight, with my laptop reading a lot of poetry from soup members. I will tell you there was a beautiful breeze. Thank you for sponsoring such a fun contest. Susan

enjoyed this write here.. also love the abc style i got to try one day.:) Enjoy your weekend as well.:)

Beautifully done ... you've got Soup mail ...

A walk by a creek can have a calming effect, good write...thanks on Part II, that is what they do is play on your pity..Danny

Still think this will be a winner. Thanks for my win in your contest, Carolyn. Love, joyce

I love the scenario! Good write,thanx!

wonderful poem. keep the creative pen flowing. autumn page

peaceful, calming story, Carolyn! and thanks for the comments! jamesy

Carolyn, Thnx for the comments on my piece...I'm asking Audrey to post this comment for me....just too bad I can't read all these poems...but I do hear about some...Jimmy

Very nice indeed. Such vivid imagery. I experienced a feeling of pure serenity as I read this poem. Thank you for sharing. Excellent.

Great ABC form...Thanks for the kind comments! Snake Plants are plants, but they still give me the creeps and real snakes stop my heart! :) Jeralynn

Do you dare to dream?,,,very good Blessings, Jackie

This ABC inspired me to attempt my own atempt at an ABC. I didn't do too bad for a very first timer, but my ultimate goal is an ABC rhymer. (Don't hold your breath waiting for it to happen anytime soon though). Great one Carolyn. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Florida...Smiles! Thank you for your most welcomed recent comments on my “STRETCH YOUR IMAGINATION!” blog. If you try the technique on any topic and it helps, I would love to hear about it. (Carolyn, Thank you for your friendship.) Love, Dane Ann

Now this is just beautiful Carolyn! You know It flowed so smoothly that I honestly did not realize that it was an ABC until I read Joyce's comment on it! Wonderful! I shall congratulate yu now!!! -Robert

Carolyn thanks for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian

Great writing. I will have to try this type of the ABC form. It is much more musical than the silly refrains from having to start each succeeding word with the next letter of the alphabet. Thanks for your comments on "If my dreams". Even Cancer could be cured faster perhaps if as much money was poured into it as is used in war. Love, Joyce

Oh yes, this one has winner written all over it! Carolyn, I loved it!. . .every letter an inspiration. Mahalo, Connie