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Visit To the Creek

Nature surrounds me
God's gifts are everywhere
     An outdoor playground

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2010 8:51:00 PM

wow. all this ABC from that one night events. Good one, Carolyn!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/26/2010 4:58:00 PM

Congrats Carolyn on your HM in the ABC contest with this wonderful poem ..enjoy your honor.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 5/26/2010 12:23:00 PM

congrats

Michael Poyntz

Date: 3/27/2010 2:21:00 PM

Mamma mia , great piece of work! Really liked the minimalist word approach irish

Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 3/25/2010 5:57:00 PM

Carolyn, My love, this is an excellent example of this style. It was a joy to read. Keep it up.

Susan Mills

Date: 3/24/2010 2:37:00 PM

Nicely done! I enjoyed reading your poem. -Susan Mills

John Freeman

Date: 3/24/2010 1:06:00 PM

A witty use of the whole alphabete to convey your story of your visit to the creek Carolyn. Thanks for your most gracious coments. Agape, Moses

Susan Keogh

Date: 3/22/2010 7:51:00 PM

I really enjoyed this poem. I was sitting on my front porch tonight, with my laptop reading a lot of poetry from soup members. I will tell you there was a beautiful breeze. Thank you for sponsoring such a fun contest. Susan

Derrick Burton

Date: 3/20/2010 12:43:00 PM

enjoyed this write here.. also love the abc style i got to try one day.:) Enjoy your weekend as well.:)

Sue Mason

Date: 3/20/2010 8:54:00 AM

Beautifully done ... you've got Soup mail ...

Danny Nunn

Date: 3/20/2010 6:38:00 AM

A walk by a creek can have a calming effect, good write...thanks on Part II, that is what they do is play on your pity..Danny

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/19/2010 5:00:00 PM

Still think this will be a winner. Thanks for my win in your contest, Carolyn. Love, joyce

Bill Frew

Date: 3/19/2010 3:41:00 PM

I love the scenario! Good write,thanx!

Autumn Page

Date: 3/19/2010 11:36:00 AM

wonderful poem. keep the creative pen flowing. autumn page

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/18/2010 5:05:00 PM

peaceful, calming story, Carolyn! and thanks for the comments! jamesy

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/18/2010 7:44:00 AM

Carolyn, Thnx for the comments on my piece...I'm asking Audrey to post this comment for me....just too bad I can't read all these poems...but I do hear about some...Jimmy

Margaret Okubo

Date: 3/17/2010 2:53:00 PM

Very nice indeed. Such vivid imagery. I experienced a feeling of pure serenity as I read this poem. Thank you for sharing. Excellent.

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 3/17/2010 1:09:00 PM

Great ABC form...Thanks for the kind comments! Snake Plants are plants, but they still give me the creeps and real snakes stop my heart! :) Jeralynn

Jackie Furgason

Date: 3/17/2010 8:20:00 AM

Do you dare to dream?,,,very good Blessings, Jackie

Billy Thekidster

Date: 3/16/2010 3:40:00 PM

This ABC inspired me to attempt my own atempt at an ABC. I didn't do too bad for a very first timer, but my ultimate goal is an ABC rhymer. (Don't hold your breath waiting for it to happen anytime soon though). Great one Carolyn. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/16/2010 5:09:00 AM

Florida...Smiles! Thank you for your most welcomed recent comments on my “STRETCH YOUR IMAGINATION!” blog. If you try the technique on any topic and it helps, I would love to hear about it. (Carolyn, Thank you for your friendship.) Love, Dane Ann

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/15/2010 6:42:00 PM

Now this is just beautiful Carolyn! You know It flowed so smoothly that I honestly did not realize that it was an ABC until I read Joyce's comment on it! Wonderful! I shall congratulate yu now!!! -Robert

Brian Strand

Date: 3/15/2010 1:07:00 AM

Carolyn thanks for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/14/2010 3:48:00 PM

Great writing. I will have to try this type of the ABC form. It is much more musical than the silly refrains from having to start each succeeding word with the next letter of the alphabet. Thanks for your comments on "If my dreams". Even Cancer could be cured faster perhaps if as much money was poured into it as is used in war. Love, Joyce