Lawrence Sharp Poet Free verse

Visit Me Dead

Perhaps you'll visit my grave some day.
You might place flowers
and sit with my vanishing memory
just long enough not to be rude.
Maybe you'll remember a good time
or a bad time that was all your fault
and you'll miss what you had
but so cheaply dismissed,
or you'll curse your cruelty,
the bad time was all your fault.
It would be a giggling tearjerker
if you recounted some long gone oddity,
or poured some cheap coffee,
'Ha ! He hated cheap coffee !'
But if we ever acknowledged the animosity
you might regret it now.
Someone would have to regret it
and it couldn't be me,
I'd be dead under your feet.
And you might still hate me dead
as much as you hated me alive,
and dead as I may be
I may have been angry enough
to even be angry now.
And it might suit us both just fine.
Or maybe I'll be cremated
and scattered at sea,
it'll be less embarrassing for both of us.

12th July 2018

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Eric Ashford August 23, 2020 at 10:42 AM Excellent piece Lawrence, it is absurd that we will like the dead more than when they lived, or hate them less than when they were alive! Death at least gives both the dead and the living a pause to let the nonsense go. Very much enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. e Lawrence Sharp August 24, 2020 at 12:09 AM Thanks for visiting this one, Eric. Keen perceptions.

Susan Ashley May 22, 2019 at 8:11 PM I was enraptured by the tangle of emotions expressed in your deep and dark poem, Lawrence. I loved every line, and especially, your last for a fitting finale. Captivating and intriguing poetry. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan Lawrence Sharp May 22, 2019 at 11:37 PM Thank you so much, Susan, I'm really pleased that this one has still drawn the eye so long after it was posted. This is one of the pieces that I value most, so visit and comment months later is really appreciated.

James Marshall Goff November 29, 2018 at 11:35 PM Beautifully dark, Lawrence! Lawrence Sharp November 30, 2018 at 3:41 AM Thanks, James, very high praise coming from a wordsmith of your caliber.

Charles Messina September 6, 2018 at 8:37 AM I wonder just how many people feel these thoughts, probably many. Excellent write, Lawrence. I wanted to read on. Love this one... Charlie Lawrence Sharp September 6, 2018 at 9:44 AM Thanks, Charles, very kind words appreciated.

Lyric Man July 13, 2018 at 7:26 AM Dead, deep, and dark.. yet irrestibly captivating, Lawerence!! Lawrence Sharp July 13, 2018 at 8:08 AM Thank you LM. High praise coming from you.

Jasmine Koria July 13, 2018 at 3:24 AM I love this piece! The last line is really, really (really!) good :) Lawrence Sharp July 13, 2018 at 3:48 AM Thanks Koria. Yours is powerful stuff.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 12, 2018 at 12:35 PM Ah, love it. Pleases my sensibilities. ;) xomo Lawrence Sharp July 12, 2018 at 11:52 PM Thanks Maureen, appreciation appreciated.