Vision's Quest

Long before the whisper's 
falling down --
upon your shoulders
as with dew's droplets
dangling so delicately

I've heard all about it
resting within your beauty
vision's quest --
speaking through the shimmers
right out in front of me

Slight touch curls to sight
enfurled in mystery
elegance flows --
blinking under seas of blue
filling in the guise of you

Before the tumbles 
where fingers adjust height
hopes hinge --
passion's melt is spinning
sated lips just beginning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Salehi Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Beautiful vision ....
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 1:20 PM
A tapestry of romantic vignettes wrapped in four slices of love laced poetry, Tim. Such a beautiful poem. With emotional depth in which to draw waters of desire to quench thirsty dreams. Star bright write. Love and more love always.
Vaso Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Dripping passion here, great write Tim!
Smith Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 11:50 PM
Passion in the air, good one Tim...
Tor Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Lovely write romantically spoken Tim
Roper Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 8:34 PM
Very beautiful and romantic, Tim,,, :) Hugs eve ~`*
Ashley Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 8:10 PM
A gracefully flowing and romantically beautiful write Tim.
Roberts Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 5:39 PM
lovely Tim....your romantic words always flow....fav...Seren
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 3:50 PM
so beautiful and passionate Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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