Visions of Family While Sleepwalking

As dusk floats on  a garden strip
Time replays an unspoken dream,
Where jasmines press upon my lip 
Lens closed, these warm hands fling upstream.

With mist adrift, I prance   arise
As dusk floats on a garden strip…
Hours stay, then dash like a firefly
Leaving me to hunt for old ties.

This walk of sleep imbues moon’s tip
Enthralled by past kin's  astral glide--
As dusk floats on a garden  strip
Till heaven opens zone's divide.

And nightingales wheel  mellow tunes:
Returning, I doze into joy's whip
Back where trance of comfort resumes,
As dusk floats on a garden strip.


7/28/2018
Sleepwalking Contest for John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Congratulations on your win. Creative and imagery that makes me feel I'm the one sleepwalking. :)
Carber Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 8:23 AM
This is lovely Nette, truly lovely. Congrats on your well deserved win!
Wade Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 3:26 AM
Love this, Congrats on a good win. Faux
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 2:29 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your win. Nice flow.. beatifully done.
Roper Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 5:04 PM
:) Congratulations on your win, Nette, nicely done... Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:36 PM
A lovely write, Nette. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 1:36 PM
This is gorgeous Nette! Congratulations on your wonderful 2nd place! : )
Hamilton Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Wonderful write Nette, congrats on another fine win!
Datu Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 10:28 AM
To sleepwalk and find yourself "meeting" departed loved ones can be heavenly. In my dream before, I saw my parents walking with me, and I woke up near tears. You regal poem lifted my spirit!
Vaso Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Very beautifully written, the imagery was so good I could picture every line!
Cunningham Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Beautifuly written verse Nette, a form I've never tried. Tom
Horsman Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Absolute dreamy poetry, nette, love the imagery.
Pandit Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 12:09 PM
You painted the visions wonderfully in verses so impressive..As dusk floats on a garden strip..Time replays an unspoken dream..well done, nette.
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