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Visions of Family While Sleepwalking

As dusk floats on a garden strip Time replays an unspoken dream, Where jasmines press upon my lip Lens closed, these warm hands fling upstream. With mist adrift, I prance arise As dusk floats on a garden strip… Hours stay, then dash like a firefly Leaving me to hunt for old ties. This walk of sleep imbues moon’s tip Enthralled by past kin's astral glide-- As dusk floats on a garden strip Till heaven opens zone's divide. And nightingales wheel mellow tunes: Returning, I doze into joy's whip Back where trance of comfort resumes, As dusk floats on a garden strip. 7/28/2018 Sleepwalking Contest for John Hamilton

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Date: 8/1/2018 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Creative and imagery that makes me feel I'm the one sleepwalking. :)
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Date: 8/1/2018 8:23:00 AM
This is lovely Nette, truly lovely. Congrats on your well deserved win!
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Date: 8/1/2018 3:26:00 AM
Love this, Congrats on a good win. Faux
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Date: 8/1/2018 2:29:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your win. Nice flow.. beatifully done.
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Date: 7/31/2018 5:04:00 PM
:) Congratulations on your win, Nette, nicely done... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/31/2018 4:36:00 PM
A lovely write, Nette. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/31/2018 1:36:00 PM
This is gorgeous Nette! Congratulations on your wonderful 2nd place! : )
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:04:00 AM
Wonderful write Nette, congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 7/29/2018 10:28:00 AM
To sleepwalk and find yourself "meeting" departed loved ones can be heavenly. In my dream before, I saw my parents walking with me, and I woke up near tears. You regal poem lifted my spirit!
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Date: 7/28/2018 10:19:00 PM
Very beautifully written, the imagery was so good I could picture every line!
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Date: 7/28/2018 4:55:00 PM
Beautifuly written verse Nette, a form I've never tried. Tom
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Date: 7/28/2018 4:16:00 PM
Absolute dreamy poetry, nette, love the imagery.
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Date: 7/28/2018 12:09:00 PM
You painted the visions wonderfully in verses so impressive..As dusk floats on a garden strip..Time replays an unspoken dream..well done, nette.
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