Visions Bold and Mundane

     A bold vision takes shape in her husband’s mind
     crowds out the mundane 
     Wondering if the world is ready to embrace it
        will it be boon, or will it be bane? …
   
        Though driving his wife nearly insane 
        Adding ‘pay husband extra attention’
        to her joyous day of ~ 

             doing three full loads of laundry
             carpooling to three different schools
             supervising homework assignments
             dusting, sweeping, mopping, vacuuming
             preparing three meals for a family of six
               and washing
               the dirty dishes ~ 

         Thank God for the mundane 
         for keeping the wife’s vision plain
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 4:06 PM
ah, the complexity of marital relationships. Perhaps being mundane allows the other to be a visionary???? much to think about.
Lawless Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 5:50 AM
and then listening to him complain about the traffic...
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