Vision Quest



         Underworld, of changelings, 
where shadows loom,
There lies a world, vitrified, consumed,
Its surface hardened, a relic of alchelimes,
a testament to sorrow, frozen in language 
warning signs.

Once a haven of life, brimming with dreams,
now encased in glass, a tragic plightstoscene.
Whispers of laughter, now silenced, 
veiled by the icy grip, 
by memories assailed upon it's sardonic lips

North, stood a river, flowing, 
purely succumbing to the liquid cascade of dreams.
Now stands a monument, 
empty and obscure, 
a sewage treatment plant of fear 
and conspiracy, not theory,
but excremeofsupremacy 
of Triremes of war eclipsing peace and prosperity.
A mosaic of black emotion, punishment's devotions. 

Change resides in this vitrified tomb,
like fangled shards 
of black mirror cutting Bards and Poets in handling, reflecting from corpused firmament womb, harpypsychords in accord with gloominess 
and despair
etched on its face,
Obsidian tears.

The competing  vision of the North-
sees a great Western deluge. A revival of the Sisterlings and the Brotherly.
Beasts roam like children in caravans 
to witness mankind,
to pay homage for eyes opened,
having seen for the first time, 
how things are meant to be, sublime.

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Date: 1/31/2024 8:25:00 PM
A very evocative and deep write this is dear Jude..It depicts transformation through vivid realms and also, dwells deep in the essence of how those souls departed from the earthling ash, now stroll as shadows in frozen dynasty of the underworld..A haven turns to mere memories and grief. This also works as a metaphor for how you've written about a world that is now covered in darkness. Very thought provoking indeed! That ending really presents a wish, hoping light to return in its sublime essence
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Jude Herrick
Date: 1/31/2024 10:24:00 PM
Thank you, Hiya. I appreciate your thoughtfulness (that sees these words in x-ray vision).
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/31/2024 8:26:00 PM
Quite a descriptive write with a vast theme and also, with immense emotions.. Love the way you've crafted this so beautifully..
Date: 1/31/2024 7:00:00 PM
Your poetry is difficult to decipher, for sure. But that last stanza I can relate to (Isaiah 11:6-9)
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Jude Herrick
Date: 1/31/2024 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Just two paths.
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