Sawan Kumar Poet Free verse

Vision In the Mood

Remember me as a sin of living path 
Render the loneliness of life 
Recollect the one and only life 
Redeem the voices of silence 
Flashing in the dew drops, the lovely horizon 
Flittering the hairy feathers, the lonely blossom 
Flowering the fertility of vision, the lovely mind 
Featuring the arena of life, the lonely silence 
Meditating in the minds of winter 
Murmuring the songs of theme 
Mingling the waves of water 
Meeting the cause of vain 
Dancing in the pyramid of hopes 
Delivering the words of power 
Dealing in the mood of core 
Dwelling the lights in color 
Seen in the darkness of cloud 
Sealing the veil of shy 
Scale in the drops of ideas 
Surrender in the wings of reality 
Loving the tale of passion 
Leaning the footsteps in fragrance 
Lingering the lips of flowers 
                        Leaving the scene in style

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Beata Agustin October 30, 2024 at 8:33 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 24, 2016 at 3:47 PM Sawan Kumar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 3, 2016 at 6:20 PM :) happy new year

Dr.Ram Mehta January 31, 2014 at 8:09 AM wonderful and impressive write and congrats on the win, Sawan

Vicky Tsiluma January 30, 2014 at 12:08 AM I love the deep imagery resonating throughout the poem. Your title provokes thought - we usually try to see the words in the mood but the vision would be more compelling and definitely more interesting. Well penned Sawan! Sawan Kumar January 30, 2014 at 12:13 AM Dear Vicky, Thanks for reading my small poem and giving fair comments. Any suggestions i can improve it. Regards Sawan

Skat A January 28, 2014 at 1:42 PM SAWAN, <3<3*CONGRATULATIONS, I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST. Take care ~SKAT~ Sawan Kumar January 28, 2014 at 10:16 PM Dear Skat, Thanks for your kind response. Sawan

Sheri Fresonke Harper January 18, 2014 at 3:45 PM Sawan, enjoyed reading this poem. I think you intended stanzas based on the different letters so I gave you an honorable mention. Don't forget to view your poem after entering and add in extra lines to break up stanzas. Enjoyed reading this and like the differing contrasts in the groups. Thanks much for entering my contest, enjoyed reading it. Sawan Kumar January 18, 2014 at 10:25 PM Hai Sheri Thanks for your valuable comment. Sawan

Skat A January 6, 2014 at 4:46 PM Sawan, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT Sawan Kumar January 6, 2014 at 6:16 PM Hai Skat Thanks for your valuable comment My name is Sawankumar aged 40 and working as application chemist in a company at Kuwait My mail Id is Sawankumar73@gmail. Com If you are interested you can come for a video calling after introducing yourself in return mail

Poet Destroyer A January 6, 2014 at 4:04 AM Sawan,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sawan Kumar January 6, 2014 at 3:31 AM A stylish art with lots of inner meaning Poem with a sense of love

Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2014 at 3:24 AM - Welcome to P-Soup, Sawan ! - Your first poem - well written ! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Sawan Kumar January 6, 2014 at 3:28 AM Thanks for your valuable comment