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Vision

I see spectrums of contrast Spectacular complements of pulsar blast Rose fields that last and last Beauty not even fiction can surpass Dark eclipses elipt a cast Freezing nights and warm grasps Present past and future laughs Rickashading smiles with only One path I see a universe in one Where you are my sun and meteors go on forever As do the darkness of your eyes As I explore you, each day's like catching butterflies The vastness of you has me mesmorized

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 11/21/2009 5:16:00 AM
I find the last three lines especially enjoyable because we all are an awesome spirit being. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/17/2009 2:28:00 PM
this beautiful poem is mesmerizingly beautiful..loved it--Charma
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