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Vision

I see blindly life Unfolding before my eyes In brilliant color

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Date: 9/13/2023 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Ellen Mecca
Date: 9/14/2023 6:48:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 9/8/2023 12:21:00 PM
Hi Ellen, I like the contrast here of blind and color, perhaps vision is more than eyes alone?
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Ellen Mecca
Date: 9/8/2023 12:32:00 PM
yes, indeed, thank you

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