Vision

I see blindly life
Unfolding before my eyes
In brilliant color
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:02 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
Mecca Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:48 AM
Thank you so much!
Faulkner Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 12:21 PM
Hi Ellen, I like the contrast here of blind and color, perhaps vision is more than eyes alone?
Mecca Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 12:32 PM
yes, indeed, thank you
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