Virtue

Today's the day I can hear people talk
Jesus is coming...Lord help me walk
I'm so tired and weak and I look like chalk
But I must go
So many people here shouting and loud
I know He won't see me just one in the crowd
As I touched His hem He turned around
Oh God! He knows!

But I heard Jesus can heal me
Though tradition just won't let me
Get close enough or touch Him
I'm unclean
If I can make it through this crowd
Without getting knocked to the ground
Just get close enough   touch His hem
I know I'll be clean...

I couldn't hide as He looked for me
So I fell at His feet and told Him everything...

Lord for 12 long years I have suffered
First one doctor and then another
What they did to me would make you shudder
If you only knew
They took everything I had
And left me feeling twice as bad
Lord there's got to be something
That You can do

He said, "Daughter, you took a chance trusting Me...
Now live blessed for you're whole and clean"

And I know Jesus can heal you
So don't let tradition be stopping you
Just get close enough to touch His hem   and you
Will be clean...

by~deborah burch©


**I wrote this having been inspired from the Gospel of Mark, Chapter 5:21-34....In the New Testament


3/28/2012
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Brown Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:53 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Easter Inspiration" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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April 6, 2012 at 9:00 PM
Deborah, I really enjoyed your personalization of this Scripture passage. Well done. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Have a blessed Easter.
Burch Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 3:21 PM
thank you so much Kim...I hope your Easter was meaningful to you as well...I heard a bird singing 'He is risen...He is risen..." just after dawn on Easter Sunday...then once the sun was up it no longer 'tweeted' the tune...or that's what it sounded like to me... love debs
Williams Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Deb, congrats on your win..David
Burch Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 3:18 PM
thank you david!! love deb
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April 6, 2012 at 2:10 AM
Congratulations Deborah xx
Burch Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 4:33 AM
Thank you ~GG~ I been reading yours too...awsome writes and wins going on girl!! big huggsss,love deb
Johnson Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 10:16 PM
lcongratulations Deborah on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
Burch Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 4:32 AM
Thank you Joyce...big huggsss,love deb
Sweetheart Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 5:23 PM
congrats Deborah on sweet success in my contest for this elegant entry luv.. appreciate support too..
Burch Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 9:18 PM
Thank you so much Linda for my win in your contest...I am so honoured!!! I am glad you enjoyed it...big huggsss,love deb
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 9:47 PM
wow, after what I just posted, I could sure use this type of faith!! But I just can't help thinking some of us are destined to endure pain. You did a great job with this poem. Love how you made the scriptures "real."
Goodson Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Fantastic! This needs music put to it. Have you ever heard the song, "Sitting at the Feet of Jesus"? I encourage you to listen to it- just googel it. Loved your poem!
Burch Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 3:43 PM
Thank you Mark...Actually it does have music to it....this is one of the songs I have written as well as put to music...I will certainly look for "Sitting at the Feet of Jesus" and give it a listen...thanks again...big huggsss,love~deb
Campi Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 2:36 AM
Enjoyed the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Burch Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 3:44 PM
Thank you so much Jancarl...huggsss~deb
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