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Virtual Reality

That roller coaster’s SOoooooo real my stomach lurches and i hold ooooooNTO the sides of my chair WHatttt? Noooo seatbelt! the voices alongside my head say i mustn’t be loud SOoooooo in whispers Iiiiii scream real Loooooooud! 11/16/2017

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/18/2017 3:35:00 PM

A fun ride!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 3:58:00 PM

:) Thanks, Richard!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/18/2017 7:09:00 AM

Spoken like an artist--enjoyed the ride!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 3:59:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/17/2017 9:12:00 PM

I love this ondulating poem, Kim. Charming.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 3:59:00 PM

Thank you, Line!

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 11/17/2017 6:12:00 PM

Hello Kim. My first and last roller coaster ride when 16. I did it on a dare. It was the worse experience I've ever had! I doubt I could write about it, the words would never match the fear and feeling of near death I experienced. Many thanks for reading my humor. Best to you. / M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2017 6:54:00 PM

I don’t like coasters either. We have virtual reality at our new library (my workplace) The coaster I chose was pretty basic but made me feel sick. It also was funny not having on a seatbelt!