Kim Rodrigues Poet Light Verse

Virtual Reality

That roller coaster’s SOoooooo
                                      real my stomach lurches
                                 and i hold ooooooNTO
                          the sides of my chair
                 WHatttt? Noooo seatbelt!
              the voices alongside
           my head say i mustn’t
        be loud SOoooooo
   in whispers Iiiiii scream
real Loooooooud!

11/16/2017

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Richard Lamoureux November 18, 2017 at 3:35 PM A fun ride! Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2017 at 3:58 PM :) Thanks, Richard!

Vijay Pandit November 18, 2017 at 7:09 AM Spoken like an artist--enjoyed the ride! Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2017 at 3:59 PM Glad you enjoyed :)

Line Gauthier November 17, 2017 at 9:12 PM I love this ondulating poem, Kim. Charming. Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2017 at 3:59 PM Thank you, Line!

Maurice Rigoler November 17, 2017 at 6:12 PM Hello Kim. My first and last roller coaster ride when 16. I did it on a dare. It was the worse experience I've ever had! I doubt I could write about it, the words would never match the fear and feeling of near death I experienced. Many thanks for reading my humor. Best to you. / M Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2017 at 6:54 PM I don’t like coasters either. We have virtual reality at our new library (my workplace) The coaster I chose was pretty basic but made me feel sick. It also was funny not having on a seatbelt!