Virtual Love

A boy and a girl accidentally met
Through the famous world wide web
They were virtually dating
And soon the boy is screeching:
"I've found my lost virtual rib! Yep!" 





07.09.2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Komala Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Thank you sweet sista Shirley...salam kenal kembali,,, felt so very nice with your visit and your beautiful comments... much luv and lights :) Sk
Posey Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 11:25 AM
WOW!! Great and humorous limerick... communication has come a long way.... I found my love through the Pony Express.... Love ya.... Jake
Poet Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 10:09 AM
Hahaha..enjoyed the Limerick very much Shirley.
Gabriella Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 10:18 PM
hahaha! Very cute! :)
A   Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 8:30 PM
ha ha, this sounds like the story of my life... well that last love story, i found my soulmate...in a virtual world... ((lol, yes he is real)) anyways... i got his ribs, and never will i give them back...xox...PD
Candy Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 12:19 PM
Happy to know that you've found your soulmate through www, Linda..few of my friends also found their half in virtual world...and still together, happily ever after :)) *hug*
Bordner Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 1:43 PM
Romantic & alarming Shirley - hopefully 'transhumanism' does not prevail - I admire your direct style - J.A.B. %
Candy Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Thank you, Justin. You successfully catch my sarcastic purpose within this poem.. :D
A  Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 9:28 AM
cute, adam found his eve, i mean virtual eve lol, enjoyed this one, LUV SKAT
Candy Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 10:30 AM
:D :D :D sooo happy that you like this one, Skat.. *Hug
Aderounmu Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 8:44 AM
Wow..
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 5:51 AM
Great unique and creative work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Candy Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 10:31 AM
Many thanks in return for visiting my work, Sara ;)
Anglesey Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 8:44 PM
Shirley, What a clever limerick... brilliant last line "found mu lost virtual rib' ... :)
Candy Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 10:31 AM
Thanks Karen.. :)) I personally like that part too...
Jones Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 5:25 PM
Very cute!
Candy Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 10:31 AM
Thanks Donna :)))
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 1:36 PM
.... lol.... well done Shirley! - Love it! - :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Candy Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 1:40 PM
lol..happy to brought you smile, Anne-Lise.. thank you for commenting on this limerick ;) *Hug ~Shirley
Tacito Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 1:25 PM
HAAA! This was charming as hell! :) You're on a roll, Shirley! Don't stop this train now! ;-)
Candy Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 1:25 PM
I'm soooo glad you like it Drake :P
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