Vip

Red Fort-

The mouth,

Army clad in white-

The teeth,

Red carpet long-

The tongue,

Lips doors opening,

The VIP,food arrives!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 11:29 AM
surreal poetry very cool. Light & Love
Thajudeen Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 11:53 AM
Thanks Debbie
Sietesantos Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Excellent imagery with a surprising end! Well done! Kind regards.
Thajudeen Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 11:53 AM
Thanks pandita
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