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countless years of toil took toll on his health, cruel poverty ravaged his handsome looks, beloved wife fell sick, closed her tired eyes, only friend remaining the dearest violin.. and little chirping birdie in cage for comfort! gifted musician kept on playing the best tunes he created in his life… charming melodies from his tender childhood, endearing family, beautiful cottage beside a murmuring brook, humming songs amidst the lap of magnificent nature! when glorious golden love blossomed like a ruby red rose at teenage years, dainty beautiful damsel held his hands, together they imagined of a peaceful life, with love and music, Violin and Guitar ! life didn't work out the way they fondly dreamed, poverty, hard work, painful diseases... bitter sadnesses of the real world, finally the soulmate departed, leaving him behind lonely with a heavy heart! sound of Violin still enchants the empty space, tiny Koel from the hills, the intent listener ! October 20, 2022 "Painting Prompted" Poetry Contest Picture: 3 155 words (160 max.) Sponsor: Lisa YY FIRST PLACE

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Date: 11/1/2022 7:42:00 AM
A heartfelt story with the musical sound of sad and beautiful sentiments. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/1/2022 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet. The picture brought the story of a lonely musician to me. Really appreciate your visit and comment.
Date: 10/30/2022 12:35:00 PM
Coming back to say congrats again!! A lovely tale with lots of feelings!!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/1/2022 8:07:00 AM
Dear Krish, Thank you. Your visit and comments inspire me.
Date: 10/29/2022 9:39:00 PM
He has made his loneliness beautiful. Though end is sad very beautifully penned. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2022 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Christuraj. The picture brought the story of a gifted, but lonely musician, to me.
Date: 10/26/2022 4:05:00 PM
A lovely description through your poetry, of the the sharing of music and love. A great entry for the contest. It should do well, my friend. Have a pleasant week, Mala. Bill
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/26/2022 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Bill. I am fortunate to share my love of music and poetry with poet-friends at this site. You always inspire with your uplifting comments - truly appreciate.
Date: 10/24/2022 10:57:00 PM
A lovely poem Mala! sadness, romance and music!! Best wishes for the contest!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/25/2022 5:31:00 AM
Dear Krish, so glad to receive your kind and inspiring comment. Happy to see your presence back in the site. Best wishes ~ Mala
Date: 10/23/2022 11:20:00 AM
I so much enjoyed reading this poem, Mala; this painting prompt has been a fount of inspiration. You project lovely images of different stages in life, and connect them all to this man's love of music and violin. It is a mixture of beautiful, happy and sad. I love the Indian Nightingale mention in the ending. A FAV for me. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 10/21/2022 2:04:00 PM
Malabika wow this is spectacular and a favorite. Your talent shines greater than the stars above with this lovely poem of yours just loved the theme and how you wrote this I am truly impressed. Congratulations on this one it is a POTD for me today as I read...
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/21/2022 3:10:00 PM
Dear Michael, Thank you so much for your kindest appreciation, and the FAVE! I really am touched with your inspiring words. This is the only story I could imagine after looking at the picture - it's just a spontaneous response. Love and blessings, Dear Friend. God bless you ~ Mala
Date: 10/20/2022 12:20:00 PM
Hello Mala, yes music fills the empty soul. Love & Friendship Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/21/2022 4:53:00 AM
Hello Mala, yes music does bring peace and calmness. Love & Friendship Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/20/2022 6:48:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. I agree - music brings peace.
Date: 10/20/2022 9:29:00 AM
....a well known canuck violinist died yesterday.....jeff knotall.....he's featured now on cbc 90.1 fm........stans sand
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/20/2022 9:46:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet, for letting me know. World lost a beautiful soul!

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