Violin

My soul floats on the musical strings
   of a violin
like a lover feels a tender touch
from a passion's prison of beautiful bliss
which paint blue and gray memories
   that drift through my mind
the way a cool summer breeze
caresses the tops of green meadow grass
   with a soothing sound of sensitivity
which helps to create worlds of words
in the poetry, I hear from the violin
   as I silently sit
and surrender to its sensual serenity
from each string touched by the bow

4/19/23
contest Writing Challenge "V" words
sponsor Constance La France
   "Violin"
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La France Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 5:04 AM
Frederic, thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, I love the music and video from the Secret Garden this music is some of my favorite, congratulations. !
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 1:56 AM
- Back with a congratulations on your winning poem, Frederic :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 9:18 PM
"like a lover feels a tender touch from a passion's prison of beautiful bliss" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Y. Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 10:14 AM
Wow! Frederic, You made good use of the chosen word. Your love for music is evident in this well-written write. Have a good day and weekend;-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 2:34 AM
- Beautiful music and beautiful poem, Frederic - Best wishes - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
Turner Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 8:53 PM
Written like a true music lover, Frederic. Very well written.
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