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Violin

My soul floats on the musical strings of a violin like a lover feels a tender touch from a passion's prison of beautiful bliss which paint blue and gray memories that drift through my mind the way a cool summer breeze caresses the tops of green meadow grass with a soothing sound of sensitivity which helps to create worlds of words in the poetry, I hear from the violin as I silently sit and surrender to its sensual serenity from each string touched by the bow 4/19/23 contest Writing Challenge "V" words sponsor Constance La France "Violin"

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Date: 4/24/2023 5:04:00 AM
Frederic, thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, I love the music and video from the Secret Garden this music is some of my favorite, congratulations. !
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Date: 4/23/2023 1:56:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations on your winning poem, Frederic :) - hugs
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Date: 4/22/2023 9:18:00 PM
"like a lover feels a tender touch from a passion's prison of beautiful bliss" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2023 10:14:00 AM
Wow! Frederic, You made good use of the chosen word. Your love for music is evident in this well-written write. Have a good day and weekend;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/20/2023 2:34:00 AM
- Beautiful music and beautiful poem, Frederic - Best wishes - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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Date: 4/19/2023 8:53:00 PM
Written like a true music lover, Frederic. Very well written.
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