Violette So Sweet

Arousing affective 
Wistful retrospective
Amorous perspective
Sweet regression 

Mystic enigmatic 
Spellbound charismatic
E'er melodramatic
Sweet discretion

Sacred sanctuary
Lovers legendary
Raw imaginary 
Sweet impression

Wandering allseeing
Spirits freely fleeing 
Roaming unbound being 
Sweet obsession

Candied fine confection 
Dulcet recollection
Stirring retrospection
Sweet digression



AP: 2nd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Inman Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Very good Line. Enjoyed the limited but precise word usage. Your rhyme is excellent.
Gauthier Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, James.
Kriticos Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 12:05 PM
Ooooo you know how I love a good rhyme this was phenomenal! Thanks for sharing!
Gauthier Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:14 PM
So happy you liked this Kyle. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Bradfield Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:31 PM
Nicely done, Line! A creative write that should do well in my opinion!
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 11:27 PM
Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment, Larry.
Roper Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:21 PM
excellent write, Line, luck in the contest.. .. Hope you had a wonderful Easter...Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:27 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Easter was wonderful. Line xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:36 PM
So sweet it is, indeed, Line!! This contest I keep putting off and I hope it's still around because I really want to try one too. Happy Easter Fool's Day!!
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:28 PM
I know what you mean, Andrea. I've been caught procrastinating a couple of times. Thanks for your visit.
Gondolf Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Nicely written, Line, best of luck in the contest. John
Gauthier Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Thank you, John, for your lovely Easter visit and comment.
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