Joseph May Poet I do not know?

Violette Poem

Spring begins to grumble
 That winter won't crumble
 Seasons seem in jumble
 Snow still falling

 The breeze will soon escort
 And spring it will exhort
 As blooms she will assort
 No more bawling

 Then lilacs will assent
 As  fragrance they  present
 And nature will consent
 No more stalling

  And birds will sing until
 Their sweet songs they instill
 As spring's joy they fulfill
 Blossoms  sprawling

 Bright colors she'll bestow
 In sunshine all aglow
 And reach a new plateau
 Summer's  calling
         ~~
 3-23-18
  Violette Poetry Contest
  Sponsor- Mick Talbot

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Susan Gentry April 22, 2018 at 2:47 PM Back to congratulate... Well done.

Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 4:16 AM Congratulation on your win, Joseph. Very refreshing read.

Gregory Richard Barden April 16, 2018 at 12:12 AM Congratulations on your win, my friend - wonderful write! :-)

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2018 at 7:08 PM I see you did a spring fling too!! The last verse was my very favorite. Love summer. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Sandra Haight April 15, 2018 at 5:08 PM Wonderfully written to meet the challenge, Joseph! Congrats on your First Place win. Sandra

Jan Allison April 15, 2018 at 1:38 PM dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier April 15, 2018 at 12:45 PM A lovely and uplifting poem. Congrats on your gold medal win, Joseph.

Subimal Sinha-Roy April 15, 2018 at 8:37 AM Congratulations, Joseph on your first position win. Great poem.

Mick Talbot April 15, 2018 at 8:32 AM Hi Joseph, Many thanks for taking up the challenge with this relatively new form. Critique: 100% perfect! A beautiful Violette airing my sentiment too! Congratulations on your 1st place, many thanks for your support... Mick Joseph May April 15, 2018 at 2:44 PM Thank you for my top placement Mick..

Susan Gentry April 15, 2018 at 3:23 AM You have this! Well-written, flows very well. Great imagery and rhymes. Perfect for the contest. Good luck!

Agona Apell April 10, 2018 at 3:05 PM Eloquent lines, beautifully woven! Love it.

FJ Thomas April 1, 2018 at 10:45 AM So very beautiful Joseph :)

Mark Peterson March 31, 2018 at 6:08 PM Very lovely, Joseph—gentle and vivid your reflections that set my ear and brain ringing with the rhyme that echoes on and on.

Chris Hagy March 28, 2018 at 10:07 AM This is lovely Joseph...I really like this rhyming pattern, you conquered it well :) Yes..."nature out of balance"...winter doesn't want to let go here in Michigan either...so ready for summers call!... have a good day :)

Jan Allison March 27, 2018 at 5:41 PM absolutely delightful spring imagery and rhyme. Good luck in the contest Joseph:-) hugs Jan x

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2018 at 4:41 PM very nice, JOseph. I particularly loved the last two stanzas, the blossoms sprawling and summer calling!! This is a challenge I want to try soon!

Ralph Sergi March 23, 2018 at 6:34 PM Beautiful poem, Joseph! (but don't forget to put an apostrophe after the n in won't)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2018 at 9:19 AM - Lovely written, Joseph :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands March 23, 2018 at 7:53 AM Sounds so nice Joseph. Well done! :)

Vijay Pandit March 23, 2018 at 7:01 AM Enjoyed reading this invitation to spring and summer..a scenic dialogue.. best for a win, Joseph.

Silent One March 23, 2018 at 5:59 AM Great imagery, Mick does some great contests...