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Violette Poem

Spring begins to grumble That winter won't crumble Seasons seem in jumble Snow still falling The breeze will soon escort And spring it will exhort As blooms she will assort No more bawling Then lilacs will assent As fragrance they present And nature will consent No more stalling And birds will sing until Their sweet songs they instill As spring's joy they fulfill Blossoms sprawling Bright colors she'll bestow In sunshine all aglow And reach a new plateau Summer's calling ~~ 3-23-18 Violette Poetry Contest Sponsor- Mick Talbot

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Date: 4/22/2018 2:47:00 PM
Back to congratulate... Well done.
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Date: 4/18/2018 4:16:00 AM
Congratulation on your win, Joseph. Very refreshing read.
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Date: 4/16/2018 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, my friend - wonderful write! :-)
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Date: 4/15/2018 7:08:00 PM
I see you did a spring fling too!! The last verse was my very favorite. Love summer. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/15/2018 5:08:00 PM
Wonderfully written to meet the challenge, Joseph! Congrats on your First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 4/15/2018 1:38:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2018 12:45:00 PM
A lovely and uplifting poem. Congrats on your gold medal win, Joseph.
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Date: 4/15/2018 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations, Joseph on your first position win. Great poem.
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Date: 4/15/2018 8:32:00 AM
Hi Joseph, Many thanks for taking up the challenge with this relatively new form. Critique: 100% perfect! A beautiful Violette airing my sentiment too! Congratulations on your 1st place, many thanks for your support... Mick
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Date: 4/15/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for my top placement Mick..
Date: 4/15/2018 3:23:00 AM
You have this! Well-written, flows very well. Great imagery and rhymes. Perfect for the contest. Good luck!
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Date: 4/10/2018 3:05:00 PM
Eloquent lines, beautifully woven! Love it.
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:45:00 AM
So very beautiful Joseph :)
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Date: 3/31/2018 6:08:00 PM
Very lovely, Joseph—gentle and vivid your reflections that set my ear and brain ringing with the rhyme that echoes on and on.
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Date: 3/28/2018 10:07:00 AM
This is lovely Joseph...I really like this rhyming pattern, you conquered it well :) Yes..."nature out of balance"...winter doesn't want to let go here in Michigan either...so ready for summers call!... have a good day :)
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Date: 3/27/2018 5:41:00 PM
absolutely delightful spring imagery and rhyme. Good luck in the contest Joseph:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 3/24/2018 4:41:00 PM
very nice, JOseph. I particularly loved the last two stanzas, the blossoms sprawling and summer calling!! This is a challenge I want to try soon!
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Date: 3/23/2018 6:34:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Joseph! (but don't forget to put an apostrophe after the n in won't)
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Date: 3/23/2018 9:19:00 AM
- Lovely written, Joseph :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2018 7:53:00 AM
Sounds so nice Joseph. Well done! :)
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Date: 3/23/2018 7:01:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this invitation to spring and summer..a scenic dialogue.. best for a win, Joseph.
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Date: 3/23/2018 5:59:00 AM
Great imagery, Mick does some great contests...
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