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FUNNY-MOONSHINE-HILLBILLY-QUOTE-CUTE-HOMEMADE-BEER-ALES-LABELS-X12-HOMEBREW-JUG

- Violets Are Not Always Blue -

port wine
                                                 moonshine
                                                    divine
                                                 cloud nine
                           port wine too expensive - now moonshine
                             divine floating sky high - on cloud nine
                     
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10/08/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Tyburn : Syllable 2-2-2-2-9-9
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Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 8:34 PM
Granny's got the right idea, Anne-Lise! Great one! :) gw
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 8:05 AM
- Cheers for grandma and you Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 1:23 PM
Great one Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 1:29 PM
- Thanks Heidi, for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 2:25 PM
I love this! A winner!
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim - Not for the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 11:23 AM
This made me smile Anne-Lise. I have never written a Tyburn. It looks a bit challenging. Yours is wonderful! : ) xxoo
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:02 PM
- Fun to write, Connie ... I wrote three pieces ... chose the first one I wrote to the contest ...: Roses Are Not Always Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 6:17 AM
Sounds like a nice evening to me.. Love this Anne-Lise. I wrote a poem titled "Moonshiner's Ditty" It has been made into a song...A little different than this one though. Hugs // Charlie :)
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 12:04 PM
- I hope you like my first one I posted to your contest, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Ah, love her sweet face, we watch that show every now and then, Nice write Sunshine, xo
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 1:34 PM
- Thank you very much, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Foster Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:42 PM
lol, sounds like a wonderful party... Watch out for elves and whimzy wine.. hehe... Loved it. Ann
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 1:33 PM
- I love elves and little cute trolls, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 11:20 AM
you are getting good at these tyburns, nice penning, though i think i will stick with the wine, moonshine would do me in :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 1:28 PM
- Many thanks Sandra, they were fun to write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 8:17 AM
I am with Granny!.. Nicely penned Anne..
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 1:27 PM
- Thumbs up for grandma :) - Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 6:49 PM
I would touch the stuff but my eyes drank in each witty line. You did indeed Tyburn excel and me thinks you enjoyed doing so. All the best ... CayCay
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 1:26 PM
- The first led to the second ... and to the third ... yes, fun to write, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 4:44 PM
i'll have the moonshine anytime, anne... gettting better at writing fascinating tyburns; wow!...happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 1:57 PM
- Many thanks Nette, for your kind visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, Moonshine souds like strong stuff. I will stick wit Gin and sometimes beer. have a nice day my friend. Hugs. Darlene
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 1:57 PM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and comment, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 9:16 PM
Norway and moonshine, very interesting
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 12:58 PM
- Moonshine is not unknown in Norway ... especially in the countryside, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Moonshine, that will blow your brains out Tried some Poteen once, I'm sure it was rocket fuel lol. Good luck. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 12:56 PM
- ... not just the brain, Tom ... the whole head would have gone in the air :) - It's probably 20 years since I took a glass of wine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Moonshine much more potent than wine..kudos for the humorous ways you make your point Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 12:51 PM
- Yes ... potent drops .... around 95/96 percent - ... to be honest, Vijay ... I don't like alcohol at all - Many thanks for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mchattie Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 4:33 PM
My Mother looks exactly like 'Granny.' It's kind of a hoot. I loved that show. I had moonshine once. That will clean out your insides. Nice write my friend. Have a good day,
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 12:43 PM
- I don't think it has been shown in Norway, David ... I haven't seen it :) - Moonshine sounds like gunpowder ... but maybe good with a stomach and intestinal cleansing :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Lol! Anne- Lise, I enjoyed the photo of" granny" from the Beverly Hillbillies.It put a huge smile on my face. It worked well with your "Tyburn"as well. If it's the contest, I wish you the best of luck. Enjoy the rest of your weekend:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 12:37 PM
- A famous grandma I understand ... I've never seen her before - "The Beverly Hillbillies" ... I haven't seen :) - Many thanks for your kind visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 3:52 PM
lovely, my friend.. I've never had moonshine , but I hear it's good.. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 12:34 PM
- Not me either, Eve :) - Not for contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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