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Violet Spirit : verse

PLACED 5th in Brian Strand 
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souls linger about
radiantly receiving
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                                   *
                                onto 
                       ~~~       EARTH 
                             dimension ~~~~~~
                                    \/\/
                                     \/
   task COMPLETE

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Velasco Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 2:32 PM
This is deeply ethereal, Ghairo—feels like a sacred moment unfolding in slow motion. “Room becomes vast” is such a powerful turning point, and the closing—“task complete”—lands with calm finality. Beautifully spiritual and expansive.
Daniels Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Thankyou Rowena. Your comments remind me of the Great Ascended Master, Lady Rowena. Perhaps you have some of her energy. Love to Philippines from SA.x.
Bertin Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 2:26 PM
violet spirit, one of the higher bandwidths of the spectrum, hmmm that is something to radiate. I hope it does well in the contest! -John
Daniels Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 9:17 AM
THANKYOU for pop-in, John.yeah, I’m an old soul with lots of violet. ( fortunate & unfortunate ). Blessings.
Baker Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 10:10 PM
Powerful poetry, Ghairo. This seems to speak of an enlightenment or experience of awareness. It seems to suggest an experience where the souls of the spiritual world connect with the person in a physical world, thus, "task complete". Nice entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck in the contest! Bill
Daniels Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 10:44 PM
I appreciate your insightful comments & regular feedback, Bill. as you know spirit world is physical world & vice versa. Ah, my friend, these contests can become addictive. will stop them soon. X.
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