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Violet Light

Oval lines of opaque light Violet tracing the universe Eons crossing; curving height Magnetic Venus flares; coerce Iridescent sisters of Mars Aurora imbued divinity Odysseys of unnamed stars Falling to the end of infinity. 7/5/19

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/10/2020 4:58:00 PM

Wow, this is a beauty. Congratulations on the top win.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/15/2020 9:19:00 AM

Thank you kindly, Jeanne~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/9/2020 8:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!!! What color and beauty. Enjoy your day.............

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/9/2020 10:59:00 AM

Appreciate it, Paula, hope you're doing well-

Julia Ward

Date: 9/9/2020 5:25:00 AM

A huge "well done" from me for your grand first place win in my contest, Michelle.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/9/2020 10:58:00 AM

I am humbled and honored by the placement, thank you kindly, Julia.

John Watt

Date: 9/8/2020 10:34:00 PM

Your violet light is filled with 'ultra' good words and images. So enjoyed the phrases "Eons crossing; curving height", and "Iridescent sisters of Mars". Also the rhymes and celestial vocab. Big congratulations for winning #1 with Julia!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/9/2020 10:57:00 AM

Thank you for your encouraging words, they always lift my spirits!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/16/2019 12:22:00 AM

Beautiful imagery.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/17/2019 4:50:00 PM

Thanks, Richard-

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/6/2019 4:54:00 AM

This is a magical, mystical write. " Iridescent sisters of Mars Aurora imbued divinity" Love it!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/17/2019 4:50:00 PM

I am happy you like it, my friend!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/5/2019 10:58:00 PM

You’ve captured my imagination with the violet light and the immense beauty of your poem. Love your rhymes too. Best wishes for a win, Michelle, and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/5/2019 11:38:00 PM

I so appreciate your encouraging comment, Susan, as always-

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/5/2019 2:36:00 PM

Such picturesque and Beautiful verse, with a lighter-than-air quality about it. It's a lock for the contest, Michelle. Nina ought to just close it right now. Wondrous! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/5/2019 11:40:00 PM

Well, I hope Nina feels the same! So grateful for your thoughtful words, gw-