Michelle Faulkner Poet Rhyme

Violet Light

Oval lines of opaque light

Violet tracing the universe

     Eons crossing; curving height

Magnetic Venus flares; coerce

     Iridescent sisters of Mars

Aurora imbued divinity

     Odysseys of unnamed stars

Falling to the end of infinity.

7/5/19

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Jeanne Mcgee September 10, 2020 at 4:58 PM Wow, this is a beauty. Congratulations on the top win. Michelle Faulkner September 15, 2020 at 9:19 AM Thank you kindly, Jeanne~

Paula Goldsmith September 9, 2020 at 8:35 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!!! What color and beauty. Enjoy your day............. Michelle Faulkner September 9, 2020 at 10:59 AM Appreciate it, Paula, hope you're doing well-

Julia Ward September 9, 2020 at 5:25 AM A huge "well done" from me for your grand first place win in my contest, Michelle. Michelle Faulkner September 9, 2020 at 10:58 AM I am humbled and honored by the placement, thank you kindly, Julia.

John Watt September 8, 2020 at 10:34 PM Your violet light is filled with 'ultra' good words and images. So enjoyed the phrases "Eons crossing; curving height", and "Iridescent sisters of Mars". Also the rhymes and celestial vocab. Big congratulations for winning #1 with Julia! Michelle Faulkner September 9, 2020 at 10:57 AM Thank you for your encouraging words, they always lift my spirits!

Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2019 at 12:22 AM Beautiful imagery. Michelle Faulkner July 17, 2019 at 4:50 PM Thanks, Richard-

Caren Krutsinger July 6, 2019 at 4:54 AM This is a magical, mystical write. " Iridescent sisters of Mars Aurora imbued divinity" Love it! Michelle Faulkner July 17, 2019 at 4:50 PM I am happy you like it, my friend!

Susan Ashley July 5, 2019 at 10:58 PM You’ve captured my imagination with the violet light and the immense beauty of your poem. Love your rhymes too. Best wishes for a win, Michelle, and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Michelle Faulkner July 5, 2019 at 11:38 PM I so appreciate your encouraging comment, Susan, as always-

Gershon Wolf July 5, 2019 at 2:36 PM Such picturesque and Beautiful verse, with a lighter-than-air quality about it. It's a lock for the contest, Michelle. Nina ought to just close it right now. Wondrous! :) gw Michelle Faulkner July 5, 2019 at 11:40 PM Well, I hope Nina feels the same! So grateful for your thoughtful words, gw-