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Violet Cream

Violet cream. A light, velvety lavender. Such was the soft glow of that particular night’s sky. Hints of golden orange blew in the clouds because of the street lights. The snow that covered the ground and the rooftops of the suburb reflected the celestial magic. The road, though surrounded with all this splendor, was still black, still motionless, still hard. It blackened any light it touched, and hid any love it felt, if it felt any love at all. It’s hard to tell whether or not she wanted the snow or if she needed some time to herself, or whatever roads think. All I know is that the snow hasn’t touched her, and a casual observer like myself would say that the road just wants to be left alone; don’t we all? What is it about snow that reminds us how heartbroken we are? The snow slowly conceals the secrets that tease a terse soul; the snow wants me to forget; but I don’t want to forget. She’s the road, and the snow is time; time isn’t hiding her from me. Everything around her is blending in the background, but she is still hard, still black, still there. A black road Surrounded by violet cream, and I, helpless to change it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/16/2010 11:53:00 AM
Enjoyed...Congratulations on being selected to go forward in the contest..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Brenden. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Brenden. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2010 10:10:00 PM
A wonderful verse reminding me of summer's passing, Brenden. This is one of my favorites today. Glad I got to read it before it gets lost again in here! I enjoyed this very much! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/6/2010 11:55:00 AM
Wonderfully expressed, Susan
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Date: 3/5/2010 7:31:00 AM
Awesome writing, Brenden. I like the way you compare her to a road covered with snow that conceals everything that troubles her. Hope she returns to you; snow melts away, maybe her heart will melt too. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2010 3:03:00 PM
GOING TO MY FAV..So deep..dont let her go.....where there is love,,there s always a way..Charma
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Brenden. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 6:48:00 PM
A wonderful write I so enjoyed reading tonight.. romantic flavor throughout .. we have 72 inches of snow on the ground right now but your poem has made the snow beautiful...thankxx for sharing..luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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