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Violet Cream

Violet cream.
A light, velvety lavender.
Such was the soft glow
of that particular night’s sky.
Hints of golden orange
blew in the clouds
because of the street lights.
The snow that covered the ground 
and the rooftops of the suburb
reflected the celestial magic.

The road,
though surrounded with all this splendor,
was still black,
still motionless,
still hard.
It blackened any light it touched,
and hid any love it felt,
if it felt any love at all.

It’s hard to tell whether or not
she wanted the snow
or if she needed some time to herself,
or whatever roads think.
All I know is that the snow hasn’t touched her,
and a casual observer like myself
would say that the road
just wants to be left alone;
don’t we all?

What is it about snow
that reminds us how heartbroken we are?
The snow slowly conceals
the secrets that tease a terse soul;
the snow wants me to forget;
but I don’t want to forget.

She’s the road,
and the snow is time;
time isn’t hiding her from me.
Everything around her
is blending in the background,
but she is still hard,
still black,
still there.

A black road
Surrounded by violet cream,
and I,
helpless to change it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 11:53 AM
Enjoyed...Congratulations on being selected to go forward in the contest..Sara
Brown Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Brenden. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Brenden. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 10:10 PM
A wonderful verse reminding me of summer's passing, Brenden. This is one of my favorites today. Glad I got to read it before it gets lost again in here! I enjoyed this very much! Peace, love, Audrey
Palli Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Wonderfully expressed, Susan
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March 5, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Awesome writing, Brenden. I like the way you compare her to a road covered with snow that conceals everything that troubles her. Hope she returns to you; snow melts away, maybe her heart will melt too. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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March 4, 2010 at 3:03 PM
GOING TO MY FAV..So deep..dont let her go.....where there is love,,there s always a way..Charma
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 10:08 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Brenden. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. Love, Carol
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March 2, 2010 at 6:48 PM
A wonderful write I so enjoyed reading tonight.. romantic flavor throughout .. we have 72 inches of snow on the ground right now but your poem has made the snow beautiful...thankxx for sharing..luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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