Violence In Video Games

There was a loud explosion, followed by shouts of glee
The rat-a-tat-tat of gunshot, was suddenly surrounding me
It was much to my horror that my husband bought the game
And to watch my boys playing it, nearly drove me insane.

They blew things up, they shot at them, and they loved every shot
“But it will warp their minds” I said, my husband said “It will not.”
He promised he would sit with them, but that’s cos he wanted to play
And he said he could drum into them that it is just a game that day.

I peered round the doorway, I watched him guide them through
They cheered, and laughed at gruesome bits, my husband cringed a bit too
But as they grew they learned, but I know this is not true of all
Mine are both big wimps, and even husband on seeing blood will fall.

They cannot stand needles, a paper cut makes them cry
They cannot watch the news, when there is death and destruction awry
So in all honesty I don’t agree with violence in video games at all
But I think it’s up to the parents to make the final call.

Children in days of old, shot each other with a home made stick gun
They made swords out of anything, and always fought to the death in fun.
Play has changed they are safer inside, the trouble now I think this is it
Is when they are left to their own devices and the videos are used just to baby-sit.

©3/01/2013
~GG~
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:51:00 AM
Mandy, :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice exposure in Yasmin's "Video Games Played " extravaganza... take care ~PD
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Date: 1/19/2013 3:06:00 PM
Great job...Fantastic piece..Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest,my friend....Kudos to you...XOXO...
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:10:00 PM
So true. Good job. You deserve the praise.
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Date: 1/18/2013 12:48:00 PM
A well deserved win for your well written poem Mandy! I too believe that the bottom line is parents' attention. Love, Annallise
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Date: 1/18/2013 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Mandy. Very well-said..Cheers!! :) Good day!
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Date: 1/18/2013 10:29:00 AM
congrats Mandy fine winner...
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Date: 1/18/2013 8:51:00 AM
Very nice and and very true. I believed every word of it and saw an image of the poem as I was reading. Great Great job !!
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:41:00 AM
It appears we are of similar mind. Talking and guiding our children will influence how they think.
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:18:00 AM
So very true and yet play does expose they to rl in a safer way. Congrad's on your thoughtful write winning. Light & Love
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Debbie xx
Date: 1/18/2013 6:03:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Mandy
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Joseph xx
Date: 1/7/2013 9:06:00 AM
Great write Mandy ,,, Happy New Year;}
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Date: 1/5/2013 2:24:00 AM
Well done Mandy. youve said it all...Seren
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Date: 1/3/2013 2:06:00 PM
told and written as it is, Mandy, those last two lines say it all.. never been a fan, of video games...good poem,
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Date: 1/3/2013 10:05:00 AM
Nice write many, you strike a chord here with me. The gory details of some films is a perversion of the mind and it can onlly immunise some people from brutal acts. Thanks for speaking out while others seek to profit.
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