Violence

violence

p l a g u e s 

cities

mayors

a p p o i n t

committees




   October 28, 2020
In a Few Words Contest 
  Sponsor: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Astute social commentary in six words! The genius of your pen never fails to amaze me, Gershon. You are as impressive as you are expressive! :) Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 5:34 PM
I see that your heart was moved to write a brevette yourself, my dear... And after reading your lovely write, I wrote another one, just posted. May we keep up this mutual inspiration society! :) Gershon
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 7:18 PM
Susan, your warm words are so welcome on this, of all nights, when I have learned of the passing of Dennis Gauthier, Line's beloved husband. May he rest in peace. Thank you, my friend. Peace, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. A "wonderful" write. Enjoy your win and day.................
Jayasankar Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:35 PM
So thought provoking..so well done. . Congrats on your win Gershon! ~ Ani
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Thank you so much for noticing, Ani. Appreciated. Happiness and Light, Gershon
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Politically astute, and nicely rhymed. Congrats on your #1 win, Lobo. And please stay safe ~ Paid for by the committee to keep John Watt out of politics
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Got it, chief. ~ Barack Obama, floating above 'mere politics'
Roper Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 10:44 PM
Gershon, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 3:58 PM
Thank you for noticing, Eve. Appreciated. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Congratulations on your win, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 8:28 PM
Very nice of you to notice, my friend. Happy weekend, Gershon
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 3:14 PM
so true GW! many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 8:28 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. And congratulations to you for 'pirating' a win yourself. Smiles, Gershon
May Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Very nicely done Gershon, Congrats on your win..
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:20 PM
Thank you for your generous evaluation of my six words, Joseph, and especially for sponsoring such a great contest, emphasizing 'economy of language,' something poetry is supposed to be all about! Peace and Serenity, Gershon
Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Back to say Congratulations on the win Gershon! Linda
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:19 PM
Appreciated, Linda. Congrats to you too on your win in the same contest. ~ Minding my Soul
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October 31, 2020 at 11:35 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:15 PM
Thanks for noticing my placement, Anne-Lise. Sunshine and Gentle Breezes, Gershon
Kauffman Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:18 AM
The committee sends best regards and congratulations on your win Gershon. Thought this might end up highly placed on the winners list! How are you doing with those leaves?
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Haha! Thanks, 'Committee!'... As for the leaves, they are leaving the trees fast now... And congrats to you for your 'reality meets creativity' win in the contest, Sam. Happy Halloween! :) gw
Y. Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:06 AM
Hi Gershon, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st well place win. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Thank you, Alexis. And congrats to you on your high first-place finish in the contest. You write was all that it could 'bee.' Cheers, Gershon
Kauffman Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Isn't that the truth, Gershon! Great take on the contest theme. Looks like a winner to me and my committee of one! Blessings my friend!
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:29 PM
What a corker of a comment: 'Your committee of one." Love it! Thanks, Sam! Cheers, Gershon
Y. Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Hi Gershon, Good take on the contest theme. There’s much truth in a few words. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Appreciate your support, Alexis. Happy Thursday evening, Gershon
Balasubramanian Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 4:48 AM
These 6 words speak a lot. I need to think really hard to match up with all the great entries I am reading. All the best for contest.
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Rama. Peace, Gershon
Mcintosh Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 4:48 AM
wonderfully done. I love it. God bless you
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:26 PM
Thank you, Gina. Happy Thursday, Gershon
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 12:46 AM
- Great done, Gershon :) - GL :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:18 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. :) Gershon
Fowler Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 6:15 PM
In true political spirit gw. Let's not do anything about it. Let's just talk about it for a while and maybe it will go away. LOL laf
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:17 PM
The problem is that neither goes away: Neither the problems nor the pols that talk endlessly about them -- and do nothing. Thanks, Linda.
Crabtree Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:54 PM
So true, Gershon...
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Unfortunately, committees = say much; do nothing. Thanks, Angela
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:43 PM
This piece is so impressive, Gershon!!
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:10 PM
Thanks for the praise on this one, Newton. Peace, Gershon
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