Vineyards of Life

black grape connoisseur 
Intense flavor aroma
permeates pallet

black grape connoisseur 
Intense flavor aroma
near the Tuscan moon 

black grape connoisseur 
Intense flavor aroma
stars favorable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Excellent poem. If it's for contest then wish you good luck. Loved always......,bl
Debole Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Like the way you have different last lines for each stanza. Easy to read imagery. Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. - Gail
Trifiatis Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Thank you!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 10:24 AM
Oh Yes! Oui mon amie! Beautiful!
Sivey Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 6:35 AM
This has to be my favorite one so far for this contest...you will do extremely well in the contest, of course that is if you entered this into the contest! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a pleasant piece, such an amazing poem, Great Work!!
Pettit Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 10:46 PM
Reminds me of the description of Naboth and his vineyard. The tragic story can be found in the First Book of Kings. That was the biggest sin committed by Ahab and Jezebel. Good write as usual Judy.
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