Vines Slowly Crawl

Life was the wing that gave them flight
 as they soared ever so high
 now death is the darkness of their plight
 where the wind mournfully sighs

 Dry bones bound by eternity's chain
 rest serenely 'neath tall shade trees
 where dreams have decayed with the leafy debris
 and silence is all that remains

 Headstones stand as sentinels
 Along the tree lined path
 Sadness clings to the overgrown vines
 in the timeless aftermath

 Within the muted reverence of this place
 the overgrown vines seem to speak
 with a voice that will oft embrace
 the departed souls mystique

 When one sentinel falls
 the others will stand tall
 Whispering secrets to the great beyond
 as the vines slowly crawl
           ~~~
9/30/16
 Contest Name: Overgrown With Vines
 Sponsor: Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Capitano Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 10:06 AM
So many great images; a 7 for sure.
Krampe Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Congrats on your win, Joseph.
La France Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Joseph, beautifully penned and CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
May Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Thanks for sponsoring a great contest Broken Wings and thank you for my placement.
Inman Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Very nice write, wonderful cadence, and a great last stanza Joseph.
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 11:20 AM
wow Joseph, this is amazingly written. "within the muted reverence of this place the overgrown vines seem to speak"- love that line...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Y. Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Hi Joseph, Your title alone caught. And as I started to read I saw a well crafted poem. Everything BW asked for was in this piece. Well done. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Daniel Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Wow! What else can I say?? Superb...!!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Amazing , Joseph. This is one of the best I have seen in this contest
Muideen Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Beautiful poem you have written my friend. Good luck in the contest........A.M.
Turner Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Looks like we think a little alike, Joseph. I chose not to make mine sad. I enjoyed your version:)
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 3:34 AM
WOW! I am blown away by the imagery Joseph and that final stanza is just the perfect ending to the poem:-) Into faves:-) hugs Jan xx
Gorelick Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Very nice....really like some of your phrases....BG
Roper Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 10:19 PM
This is wonderful you have copied the painting perfect :-) good luck in the contest looks like a winner Hugs
Leiser Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 10:13 PM
Masterfully written...poetry at its finest! 7++
Jones Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 9:18 PM
well done joseph....have missed your writing...
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