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Vinegar

Women,captivating women.... In our eyes like diamond And honey comb in the mouth, Only if savored with the Right motive at the right time. Outside this, Women are vinegar....

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Date: 11/1/2010 4:59:00 AM
Interesting idea about women..Women are multpliers : give them love and they will give it back and even give you a child..Give them a house and they will make you a home...Buy them groceries and they will make many meals...Give them frustration and they will give you__Sara
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Date: 10/31/2010 11:05:00 AM
I like what Doris said. Yes, we can be like vinegar or we can be as sweet as honey. Not all fit into one pickle jar. Ha ha ha. Phyl
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Date: 10/31/2010 9:45:00 AM
yes,they are preserving,but can be sour like vinegar if contacted wrongly.
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:59:00 AM
Women are sour yet preserving?
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:41:00 AM
Good point, enjoyed the control of this poem :) Sheri
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