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Village Childhood

He was the village blacksmith
To us children he was known
As our adopted Uncle Wilf
They’d no children of their own.
Six days a week he worked,
His hours long and physically hard.
Our cottage back door opened 
Straight onto the smithy yard.

The yard was full of machinery
Each one a potential toy, 
Schooner, stagecoach, tank
Imagined by a lonely little boy.
A binder, a reaper, a hay rake
A seed drill, a harrow, a plough
I never saw them arrive and go
They just came and went somehow.

Sometimes there were farmers
Serious, big weathered men.
Talking quietly in the Forge 
Maybe laughing now and then.
I stood there among them, 
Old Tom’s youngest lad,
They all knew and respected
My hard working labourer dad.

Uncle Wilf talked as he worked,
Never had much time to stop,
Always work to be done
In a busy blacksmith’s shop. 
Sometime he’d let me help him,
Giving me a little job to do,
Like handing him the nails to be
Driven into a  Shire’s new shoe.

Just a country childhood 
Just after the Second War
And binders, harrows and reapers 
Weren’t so much needed anymore.
The big Combined Harvester
Very quickly came along 
And, not long after, the Shires  
And village smithies were all gone.

Now, seventy years later,
Eyes closed, I recall with joy
My very special childhood as
A lonely Yorkshire village boy.
Life seemed to be a lot slower 
And people didn’t have a lot
But we’d really appreciated  
The  little bits we’d all got.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/31/2023 10:51:00 AM
Terry - you make your childhood sound magical, even for “a lonely Yorkshire village boy.” It’s wonderful that you’re able to remember so much and to get it onto the page in such a delightful way…
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 12:15:00 PM
Thanks ilene - y today’s standards i think itveas
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 11:16:00 AM
Thanks ilene - y today’s standards i think itveas
Date: 3/31/2023 3:34:00 AM
As usual an incredible memory you shared. Its sad when a skilled profession isn't needed any more. Having no kids of their own I bet he adored you. Thank goodness that you can immortalise all these memories Terry. I bet this one goes down well when you perform it. Best wishes Wen
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 3:49:00 AM
Thanks Wen - this is a brand new poem, only written the day I put it on Soup. Need to learn it before I perform it. For reasons you know I can’t always read fluently, but will get there.

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