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Village Childhood

He was the village blacksmith To us children he was known As our adopted Uncle Wilf They’d no children of their own. Six days a week he worked, His hours long and physically hard. Our cottage back door opened Straight onto the smithy yard. The yard was full of machinery Each one a potential toy, Schooner, stagecoach, tank Imagined by a lonely little boy. A binder, a reaper, a hay rake A seed drill, a harrow, a plough I never saw them arrive and go They just came and went somehow. Sometimes there were farmers Serious, big weathered men. Talking quietly in the Forge Maybe laughing now and then. I stood there among them, Old Tom’s youngest lad, They all knew and respected My hard working labourer dad. Uncle Wilf talked as he worked, Never had much time to stop, Always work to be done In a busy blacksmith’s shop. Sometime he’d let me help him, Giving me a little job to do, Like handing him the nails to be Driven into a Shire’s new shoe. Just a country childhood Just after the Second War And binders, harrows and reapers Weren’t so much needed anymore. The big Combined Harvester Very quickly came along And, not long after, the Shires And village smithies were all gone. Now, seventy years later, Eyes closed, I recall with joy My very special childhood as A lonely Yorkshire village boy. Life seemed to be a lot slower And people didn’t have a lot But we’d really appreciated The little bits we’d all got.

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Date: 3/31/2023 10:51:00 AM
Terry - you make your childhood sound magical, even for “a lonely Yorkshire village boy.” It’s wonderful that you’re able to remember so much and to get it onto the page in such a delightful way…
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 12:15:00 PM
Thanks ilene - y today’s standards i think itveas
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 11:16:00 AM
Thanks ilene - y today’s standards i think itveas
Date: 3/31/2023 3:34:00 AM
As usual an incredible memory you shared. Its sad when a skilled profession isn't needed any more. Having no kids of their own I bet he adored you. Thank goodness that you can immortalise all these memories Terry. I bet this one goes down well when you perform it. Best wishes Wen
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 3:49:00 AM
Thanks Wen - this is a brand new poem, only written the day I put it on Soup. Need to learn it before I perform it. For reasons you know I can’t always read fluently, but will get there.
Date: 3/30/2023 2:37:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this one
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Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Dilly -I really enjoyed loving it. The Old Forge is still there but now a Protected Building. Uncle Wilf and Auntie Skelton sadly long gone but not forgotten.

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