Views

I like to read the Real Estate
To see what money buys.
Of course, I’m never moving 
But it’s fun to fantasize.

This week’s had an apartment
That there’s no way I would choose
Since the “Cons” in the description 
Listed “underwhelming views.”

To pay that kind of money,
What would mean a lot to me
Would be looking out the windows 
Feeling whelmed by what I’d see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 12:58 PM
For sure, Ilene!!! Now I want to see what your other recent poem was about.
Anaya Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Gives me night terrors wondering if I could ever keep a mansion up. I still cut out the pictures in the R.E. section of the paper; Malibu homes, palm trees etc. rich!
Allison Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 12:24 PM
gosh an estate agent who gives an honest critique lol - usually they 'big it up; lol hugs jan xx
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